[Cwg-framework-principles] Proposed timeline and updated draft Framework of Principles document

[James Galvin]

I have reviewed this document and am fine with all changes shown.  With 
respect to the non-editorial comments and questions I offer the 
following.

1. I agree with the addition of Step 5, “Post-Closure of CCWG”.

2. I also agree that we should probably add a section for “Data and 
Metrics” as suggested.  We do reference the use of data and metric a 
few times in the document so I think this would be helpful.  I don’t 
have a suggestion for text and so I’m also going to say I’m fine 
with this going forward as is if no one else is able to put forth a 
suggestion.

One last suggestion I would make is perhaps we should suggest in the 
conclusions that this document should be reviewed and considered for 
revision in 3 years or after 3 CCWGs have completed, whichever is later.

Jim




On 26 Jan 2016, at 13:50, Mary Wong wrote:

> Dear CWG members,
>
> To follow up on the call that was held last week, here is the amended 
> timeline that was discussed; you’ll see that we have allowed for one 
> additional CWG call (on 11 February) as well as an open community 
> session during ICANN55 in Marrakech, which will be during the public 
> comment period we hope to open for our Framework document.
>
> 21 January – CWG call to discuss any concerns/comments about the 
> updated draft Framework document
> 5 February – deadline for final CWG comments
> 11 February – CWG call to discuss additional concerns raised between 
> 21 January and 5 February
> 19 February – publication of Framework document for public comment, 
> for the prescribed 40 day period (unless the CWG or the ccNSO or GNSO 
> Councils request an extension); document will also be sent to all 
> other ICANN SO/ACs to alert them to the proposed recommendations and 
> to seek feedback
> 6-10 March – ICANN55 (schedule a community session to present and 
> discuss community feedback on the Framework document)
> 30 March – close of public comment period; Framework to be updated 
> if necessary based on public comments received
> Mid-April – updated Framework document sent to CWG for final 
> approval
> End-April – final Framework document sent to ccNSO and GNSO Councils 
> (the Chartering Organizations for our CWG)
> May/June – consideration and adoption of Framework by ccNSO and GNSO 
> Councils
>
> For your convenience, the draft Framework document is appended to this 
> email. Besides cleaning up some formatting, grammatical and 
> typographical errors, we have also added language in a few places in 
> Section 3 to reflect the discussion on the CWG call last week – 
> these additions can be seen as “redlined” markup text in the 
> attachment.
>
> Please also note that Section 4 contains a number of open questions 
> for which your feedback will be helpful. You may also, as a CWG, 
> decide to seek public comment on some of these questions as well.
>
> We will send around call-in details for the proposed CWG call on 11 
> February shortly.
>
> Thanks and cheers
> Mary
>
>
> Mary Wong
> Senior Policy Director
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
> Telephone: +1-603-5744889
>
>
> From: 
> <cwg-framework-principles-bounces at icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles-bounces at icann.org>> 
> on behalf of Steve Chan 
> <steve.chan at icann.org<mailto:steve.chan at icann.org>>
> Date: Thursday, January 21, 2016 at 12:32
> To: 
> "cwg-framework-principles at icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles at icann.org>" 
> <cwg-framework-principles at icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles at icann.org>>
> Subject: [Cwg-framework-principles] - Proposed Agenda
>
> Dear CWG Members,
>
> Apologies for the late delivery, but below, please find the proposed 
> agenda for the meeting scheduled for 15:00 UTC on 21 January 2016. In 
> addition, attached, please find the draft framework that staff already 
> circulated on 21 December 2015, which will serve as the central point 
> of discussion for this call.
>
> *   Roll Call/SOIs
> *   Discussion of Circulated Draft Framework
> *   Next Steps
>
> I look forward to speaking with those that can attend the call.
>
> Best,
>
>
>
> Steven Chan
> Sr. Policy Manager
>
> ICANN
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