[CWG-Stewardship] For your review: updated public comment review tool

[Jonathan Robinson]

Marika,


Many thanks to you and the ICANN Staff team for the hard and diligent work
in keeping on top of this.

 

Jonathan

 

From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org] 
Sent: 26 May 2015 11:10
To: cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: updated public comment review
tool

 

Dear All,

 

Please find attached for your review the updated public comment review tool
which now also includes those comments that were received after the
deadline. For the record, 53 submissions have been received in total.

 

As the comments from Chuck were received after staff had started work on the
updated version, you'll find included a compare versions document that will
highlight the comments included by Chuck on the 22 May version as well as
the comments that were added in this updated version. 

 

Best regards,

 

Marika  

 

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Date: Friday 22 May 2015 20:34
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
Cc: Brenda Brewer <brenda.brewer at icann.org>
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and
review tool

 

Dear all, 

 

Staff has compiled a summary overview of the pubic comment submissions and
filled out a public comment review tool, noting responses and specific
action items for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these
documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment
submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted in
blue in the response column (far right).  

 

The Public Comment Review Tool is very long and may be difficult to read.
This is due to staff's approach in thorough and detailed review. We will
provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for
Tuesday's meeting. We are providing the long version to you today to
demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week's high-intensity
meetings. 

 

While the Public Comment Review Tool is very detailed, the summary overview
is presented in a presentation format and focuses more on the "bigger
picture". Depending on your review-style, you may be inclined to start with
one or the other document. 

 

Also, please note that these documents incorporate all (44) submissions
received up until the deadline on 20 May at 23:59 UTC. As of 22 May at 16:00
UTC, there are (7) late submissions. These submissions have not yet been
incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the
high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on the
extension for those who are reliant on translations). 

 

As a reminder, Brenda kindly pulled all the submissions together on the
Wiki:  <https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw>
https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw. You can download all the files at once
(like a zip file) by clicking on the "download all" button at the bottom
left side of the macro. 

 

Have a good (submission-reading-filled) weekend, 

Grace

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