[Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty oftime for revisions before our next meeting

[Jonathan Robinson]

Thanks Mikey,

 

FWIW, the comments are very similar to Word i.e. I think as part of the
"Review" tab.  It does seem to have full redline / mark up capability but I
couldn't get to use that properly for now.

 

As to the substance, I wasn't suggesting removing slides 11 & 12 at this
stage rather being completely clear on their purpose and how we fit in
communicating that content.

 

Jonathan

 

From: Mike O'Connor [mailto:mike at haven2.com] 
Sent: 17 March 2014 12:49
To: Jonathan Robinson
Cc: Manal Ismail; gac-gnso-cgs at icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gac-gnso-cg] revised version of the slide deck -- still plenty
oftime for revisions before our next meeting

 

hi Jonathan,

 

astounding!  i had no idea there was a way to put comments on a Powerpoint
slide.  you've just rocked my world.  interestingly, all your comments show
up with my name across the top.  a glitch.

 

i'm fine with your suggestions.  i've built on your version by slightly
simplifying the graphic (just like with editing text, "less is better") in a
way that i'm hoping will improve comprehension.  it's easy to roll back to
the old versions if people don't like these new ones.  i've attached that
version.  

 

right Jonathan, the last two slides are examples of one of the ideas we're
thinking about on the Early Engagement track.  i would note that the second
of those two slides is actual "content" that i would be loath to give up if
the schedule gets compressed.  that's a summary of "The Queue" - our hope
with this slide is to give GAC members an actual alert that there are some
PDPs that they may have a strong interest in.  and many of them are in the
early stages - so they represent opportunities for early engagement in real
life.  i'd cheerfully give up the second to the last slide, but would at
least like to flash that last one in front of people.

 

thanks!

 

mikey

 

 

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