[gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters

[James M. Galvin]

I don’t have any objections.  I have made a couple of editorial suggestions to these letters for your consideration.  The most notable thing I did was change “contact data” to be “contact information” wherever it appeared.  I feel we should be consistent with our terminology.  I’m okay if you want to use something other than “contact information”.

I have attached redlined documents for your review.

Jim

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On 30 Jan 2014, at 10:08 AM, Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann at icann.org> wrote:

> Dear all,
> In case there were any problems opening the .docx document from my previous email, here are the documents again, both in .doc versions. As Julie mentioned earlier, if we do not hear any objections we will send the GACinput letter as well as those to the GNSO's SG/C and ICANN's AC/SO out tomorrow. 
> Best wishes,
> Lars
> 
>  
> 
> From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann at icann.org>
> Date: Friday, January 24, 2014 4:30 PM
> To: "gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg at icann.org" <gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg at icann.org>
> Subject: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters
> 
> Dear all,
> Having consulted with our Senior Director for GAC relations, Olof Nordling, I have slightly extended the letter based on his input. In addition, please also find attached a letter that you might want to send out to individual GAC members; you can find the list of current GAC here Representatives - https://gacweb.icann.org/display/gacweb/GAC+Representatives. As you see email addresses are provided for both so we could send the letter to those members you might think are most useful.
> Many thanks and best wishes,
> Lars
> 
> 
>   
> From: Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund at icann.org>
> Date: Thursday, January 23, 2014 4:32 PM
> To: "gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg at icann.org" <gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg at icann.org>
> Subject: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters
> 
> Dear PDP WG members,
> 
> Per the action items from today's meeting attached are two letters.  One is for the GAC and one is for the other SOs and ACs.  These also are posted to the wiki at https://community.icann.org/display/tatcipdp/23+January+2014 under "For Review."  The action is to finalize these letters so that they can be sent by Friday, 31 January.  Please send any comments, questions, or changes to this list by COB Tuesday, 28 January.  Staff will compile the changes and send revised versions for approval by 30 January on the list.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Julie
> 
> Julie Hedlund, Policy Director
> <GACinput_final.doc><individual GAC Letter_v2.doc><Request for Input to SO-AC 23 January 2014.doc>