[Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] Fwd: 20171128 Work Track 5 TOR for WT Consideration + comments - Aslam Mohamed Redline

[Aslam Mohamed]

Dear All
I rely on Steve Chan email setting deadline for submission of redlines by December 20th. Kindly note my comments in attached for consideration as final version.
I have borrowed Heather’s recommendation to define genomes as one of the first jobs to be done by WT5 instead of trying to freeze it in the TOR. e&oe.



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