[gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement

[Andrew Sullivan]

On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 05:42:17PM +0000, Sara Bockey wrote:
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> The problem statement should be explicit and to the point, without extraneous wording or viewpoints.  Accordingly, my proposed revisions are attached.
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I think this is vastly better because it is more constrained.

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