[gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement
Andrew Sullivan
ajs at anvilwalrusden.com
Tue Aug 23 13:43:49 UTC 2016
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 05:42:17PM +0000, Sara Bockey wrote:
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> The problem statement should be explicit and to the point, without extraneous wording or viewpoints. Accordingly, my proposed revisions are attached.
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I think this is vastly better because it is more constrained.
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Andrew Sullivan
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