[gnso-review-dt] Re: [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

[William Drake]

Hi

Thanks Chuck for your work here, appreciated.  Sorry for the slow reply but coordination takes time and nobody had factored another round of corrections and rebuttals into their schedules.

You nicely make a number of the points NCUC would raise.  At the same time, there are a couple passages that just don’t work for us, and a couple amplifications we’d add.  I attach suggested edits to discuss on the call later.  If we can get consensus on RT comments fine, if not ok we can each submit separate replies as befits a process engineered to strengthen divisions rather than promote consensus in the community.

Best

Bill

> On Sep 18, 2015, at 1:18 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
> 
> I took a first crack at possible Working Party comments on Westlake's Recommendation 23 that we discussed in most of our meeting yesterday.  I have to confess that I am not real satisfied with my draft but I hope that it will facilitate our efforts to create one even if we ignore mine and start from scratch.
>  
> If we do develop comments, I think that it would be important for us to try to get unanimous approval by Working Team members who participate in writing and approving the comments or, if we cannot do that, at least provide an opportunity for minority statements.
>  
> Open and free criticism is welcome including from those in the NPOC like Klaus.
>  
> Chuck
> <Draft Points on Westlake Goverance GNSO Review Final Report.docx>

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