RE: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

[Jen Wolfe]

Thanks, Chuck.  I am attaching a revised version of the draft communication.  I accepted Amr's changes and added a few of my own (redlined in the attached document).  I also made the formatting/renumbering changes.  I went ahead and accepted the formatting changes to keep it easier to read.  Please let me know if you have any concerns with the proposed revisions.

If any one else would like to make revisions, please just let us know so we can continue to track versions appropriately.  Again, we are targeting to provide this draft to council by Thursday before their meeting.  If I don't receive any objections, I will provide to staff to circulate to GNSO Council on Thursday morning (EDT).  

Pending feedback from Council, we will either proceed with providing this to the OEC or, if there is objection in the community or from Council, we will notify the OEC that there is concern about Revised Recommendation 23 and that a more formal statement with be forthcoming, pending time for review and comment.  

Thanks again for your continued support of this effort- have a great day!

Jen

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-----Original Message-----
From: Gomes, Chuck [mailto:cgomes at verisign.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2015 9:43 AM
To: Jen Wolfe <jwolfe at wolfedomain.com>; gnso-review-dt at icann.org
Cc: Amr Elsadr <aelsadr at egyptig.org>
Subject: RE: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

Amr's edits look fine to me.

Jen - I fully support you adding your comments about the other recommendations and also restructuring as you think best.

Chuck

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-gnso-review-dt at icann.org [mailto:owner-gnso-review-dt at icann.org] On Behalf Of Jen Wolfe
Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2015 8:49 AM
To: gnso-review-dt at icann.org
Cc: Amr Elsadr
Subject: FW: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

I am forwarding the revised document from Amr.  Thanks, Amr for taking the first pass at making revisions noted.  If you plan to make edits, please send a quick note around so we can track version control.

I would like to add my suggestion that we include either in the opening, conclusion or both that there are 35 other recommendations, many of which there is wide spread consensus for support, based upon public comments, and that we, as the Working Party will be meeting to discuss recommendations on implementation.  Please let me know if that continues to be acceptable to everyone.  

We still need to restructure the numbering as well, per our discussion.  I'm happy to do that.  Please let me know, though, if anyone else wants to make substantive changes and I'll wait to make the structure changes and incorporate my above comment.  We are targeting delivering this to GNSO Council by Thursday, prior to the council meeting.

If anyone from the BC or IPC can offer comments, that would be greatly helpful.  There was no one on the last two calls and just want to make sure you do not object to this communication.  

Thanks so much for your continued support and commitment to this process!

Jen

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-----Original Message-----
From: Amr Elsadr [mailto:aelsadr at egyptig.org]
Sent: Monday, September 21, 2015 5:57 PM
To: Jen Wolfe <jwolfe at wolfedomain.com>
Subject: Re: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

Hi,

I’ve attached a document to this email with the changes I suggested during today’s call, along with a couple more. As suggested by Chuck, I used a clean copy of the document following the edits provided by Bill, then made redline changes to that so that all changes following today’s call are clearly visible.

Could you please forward this to the working party list for consideration?

Thanks Jen.

Amr

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