RE: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

[Gomes, Chuck]

Amr's edits look fine to me.

Jen - I fully support you adding your comments about the other recommendations and also restructuring as you think best.

Chuck

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-gnso-review-dt at icann.org [mailto:owner-gnso-review-dt at icann.org] On Behalf Of Jen Wolfe
Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2015 8:49 AM
To: gnso-review-dt at icann.org
Cc: Amr Elsadr
Subject: FW: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

I am forwarding the revised document from Amr.  Thanks, Amr for taking the first pass at making revisions noted.  If you plan to make edits, please send a quick note around so we can track version control.

I would like to add my suggestion that we include either in the opening, conclusion or both that there are 35 other recommendations, many of which there is wide spread consensus for support, based upon public comments, and that we, as the Working Party will be meeting to discuss recommendations on implementation.  Please let me know if that continues to be acceptable to everyone.  

We still need to restructure the numbering as well, per our discussion.  I'm happy to do that.  Please let me know, though, if anyone else wants to make substantive changes and I'll wait to make the structure changes and incorporate my above comment.  We are targeting delivering this to GNSO Council by Thursday, prior to the council meeting.

If anyone from the BC or IPC can offer comments, that would be greatly helpful.  There was no one on the last two calls and just want to make sure you do not object to this communication.  

Thanks so much for your continued support and commitment to this process!

Jen

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-----Original Message-----
From: Amr Elsadr [mailto:aelsadr at egyptig.org]
Sent: Monday, September 21, 2015 5:57 PM
To: Jen Wolfe <jwolfe at wolfedomain.com>
Subject: Re: [gnso-review-dt] [gnso-review-dt] GNSO Review Working Party Draft Statement on Westlake Goverance’s Final GNSO Review Report

Hi,

I’ve attached a document to this email with the changes I suggested during today’s call, along with a couple more. As suggested by Chuck, I used a clean copy of the document following the edits provided by Bill, then made redline changes to that so that all changes following today’s call are clearly visible.

Could you please forward this to the working party list for consideration?

Thanks Jen.

Amr