[Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working principles for your review

[Gomes, Chuck]

Thank you very much Mary.

All - Note that Nic plans to provide his revision of this document several days before our next call, which will be next Thursday at the same time as today.  Please plan on reviewing, and if possible commenting, on that document prior to our call next week.

Thanks, Chuck

From: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org [mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong
Sent: Thursday, January 16, 2014 7:01 PM
Cc: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
Subject: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working principles for your review

Hello everyone,

As discussed on the sub-team call earlier today, I've updated the Working Principles document to reflect: (1) the wording change to the definition of "multi stakeholder model", per Michael's input from the Definitions sub-team; (2) the reworked bullet points on the General Principles that reflect the basis of Policy and Implementation processes in ICANN's multi-stakeholder model; (3) removal of several Additional Principles that the group agreed were already incorporated into the three General Principles; and (4) a new "Section III" for the group to consider including as Explanatory Notes to the three General Principles (if needed).

Please note that I've taken the liberty of deleting earlier comments in the previous version that were dealt with by the group today, and moved some remaining comments from the Additional Principles section to the new Section III as they do not seem to encapsulate additional principles but rather expound on specific aspects of the General Principles. Where I've added language, I've highlighted that in yellow in this new version.

Should you wish to ensure that I have not inadvertently lost some comments or suggestions from the previous version, I attach that as well for your convenience.

For the benefit of those sub team members who were not able to be on the call today, Nic Steinbach has kindly offered to further review and revise this updated document framework in time for the group's next meeting on Thursday 23 January.

Thanks and cheers,
Mary


Mary Wong
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Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
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From: <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com<mailto:cgomes at verisign.com>>
Date: Tuesday, January 14, 2014 2:25 PM
To: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org<mailto:marika.konings at icann.org>>, Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com<mailto:nic at name.com>>
Cc: "gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>" <gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>>
Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your review

While encouraging sub-team members to comment on any items in this document, I especially want to ask all of you to do one more review of the overarching principle at the beginning.  We spent most of our call last week working on the wording of that and I would like to move past that in our call this week.  If you have any more comments or edits about the overarching principle, please communicate them before our call on Thursday if at all possible.  I would like to spend no more than 5 or 10 minutes on the overarching principle at the beginning of our call this week and move on to the other draft principles.

Chuck

From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org]
Sent: Saturday, January 11, 2014 5:59 AM
To: Nic Steinbach; Gomes, Chuck
Cc: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your review

Dear All,

To facilitate your review, I've integrated Nic's comment into the document as well as those sent by Avri earlier this week (see attached). Please feel free to add any further comments to this version of the document.

Thanks,

Marika

From: Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com<mailto:nic at name.com>>
Date: Friday 10 January 2014 19:08
To: Chuck Gomes <cgomes at verisign.com<mailto:cgomes at verisign.com>>
Cc: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org<mailto:marika.konings at icann.org>>, "gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>" <gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>>
Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your review

Hello All,

In the interest of kicking off an online discussion prior to next week's call, I have added a few more comments to this doc. Focused on the principles we hadn't gotten to in a meeting yet.

Have a nice weekend,

Nic

On Fri, Jan 10, 2014 at 8:53 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com<mailto:cgomes at verisign.com>> wrote:
Thanks a lot Marika.

When you or Mary have time, I think it would be helpful if the comments that Avri sent yesterday were added to this document.  I believe they dealt with principles after the overarching principle so they did not come up in yesterday's discussions but I don't want to lose those going forward.

Chuck

From:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org> [mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org>] On Behalf Of Marika Konings
Sent: Friday, January 10, 2014 3:15 AM
To: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org<mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
Subject: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your review

Dear All,

Please find attached for your review the latest version of the working principles document as updated during our meeting yesterday. I also removed the comments that I believe were addressed as part of yesterday's conversation.

Please share any additional comments and/or edits you have with the mailing list ahead of our next meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 16 January at 21.00 UTC for 90 minutes.

Best regards,

Marika

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