[Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Further updated working principles for your review

Mary Wong mary.wong at icann.org
Fri Jan 17 00:00:57 UTC 2014 

Hello everyone,

As discussed on the sub-team call earlier today, I've updated the Working
Principles document to reflect: (1) the wording change to the definition of
"multi stakeholder model", per Michael's input from the Definitions
sub-team; (2) the reworked bullet points on the General Principles that
reflect the basis of Policy and Implementation processes in ICANN's
multi-stakeholder model; (3) removal of several Additional Principles that
the group agreed were already incorporated into the three General
Principles; and (4) a new "Section III" for the group to consider including
as Explanatory Notes to the three General Principles (if needed).

Please note that I've taken the liberty of deleting earlier comments in the
previous version that were dealt with by the group today, and moved some
remaining comments from the Additional Principles section to the new Section
III as they do not seem to encapsulate additional principles but rather
expound on specific aspects of the General Principles. Where I've added
language, I've highlighted that in yellow in this new version.

Should you wish to ensure that I have not inadvertently lost some comments
or suggestions from the previous version, I attach that as well for your
convenience. 

For the benefit of those sub team members who were not able to be on the
call today, Nic Steinbach has kindly offered to further review and revise
this updated document framework in time for the group's next meeting on
Thursday 23 January.

Thanks and cheers,
Mary


Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
Email: mary.wong at icann.org

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From:  <Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com>
Date:  Tuesday, January 14, 2014 2:25 PM
To:  Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>, Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com>
Cc:  "gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org"
<gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
Subject:  Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for
your review

> While encouraging sub-team members to comment on any items in this document, I
> especially want to ask all of you to do one more review of the overarching
> principle at the beginning.  We spent most of our call last week working on
> the wording of that and I would like to move past that in our call this week.
> If you have any more comments or edits about the overarching principle, please
> communicate them before our call on Thursday if at all possible.  I would like
> to spend no more than 5 or 10 minutes on the overarching principle at the
> beginning of our call this week and move on to the other draft principles.
>  
> Chuck
>  
> 
> From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org]
> Sent: Saturday, January 11, 2014 5:59 AM
> To: Nic Steinbach; Gomes, Chuck
> Cc: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your
> review
>  
> 
> Dear All,
> 
>  
> 
> To facilitate your review, I've integrated Nic's comment into the document as
> well as those sent by Avri earlier this week (see attached). Please feel free
> to add any further comments to this version of the document.
> 
>  
> 
> Thanks,
> 
>  
> 
> Marika
> 
>  
> 
> From: Nic Steinbach <nic at name.com>
> Date: Friday 10 January 2014 19:08
> To: Chuck Gomes <cgomes at verisign.com>
> Cc: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>,
> "gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org" <gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org>
> Subject: Re: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your
> review
> 
>  
> 
> Hello All, 
> 
>  
> 
> In the interest of kicking off an online discussion prior to next week's call,
> I have added a few more comments to this doc. Focused on the principles we
> hadn't gotten to in a meeting yet.
> 
>  
> 
> Have a nice weekend,
> 
>  
> 
> Nic
> 
>  
> 
> On Fri, Jan 10, 2014 at 8:53 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks a lot Marika.
>  
> When you or Mary have time, I think it would be helpful if the comments that
> Avri sent yesterday were added to this document.  I believe they dealt with
> principles after the overarching principle so they did not come up in
> yesterday¹s discussions but I don¹t want to lose those going forward.
>  
> Chuck
>  
> 
> From:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org
> [mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Marika
> Konings
> Sent: Friday, January 10, 2014 3:15 AM
> To: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl at icann.org
> Subject: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles for your
> review
> 
>  
> 
> Dear All,
> 
>  
> 
> Please find attached for your review the latest version of the working
> principles document as updated during our meeting yesterday. I also removed
> the comments that I believe were addressed as part of yesterday's
> conversation. 
> 
>  
> 
> Please share any additional comments and/or edits you have with the mailing
> list ahead of our next meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 16
> January at 21.00 UTC for 90 minutes.
> 
>  
> 
> Best regards,
> 
>  
> 
> Marika
> 
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> 
>  
> -- 
> 
> Nic Steinbach
> 


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