[ICANN-CSC] Fwd: updated charter edits

[Elaine Pruis]

Good catch, thanks Elise!

On Fri, Sep 8, 2017 at 4:58 PM, Elise Gerich <elise.gerich at iana.org> wrote:

> Hi Elaine,
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> Thanks for circulating the updated version with suggested edits.  For row
> 11, I’d like to propose a minor revision – replace “IANA Functions
> Operator” with “ICANN”.  With the proposed change it would read:
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> *ICANN* will provide secretariat support for the CSC.  *ICANN* will also
> be expected to provide and facilitate remote participation in all meetings
> of the CSC.
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> The current draft says ICANN will provide secretariat support, and then
> says the IANA Functions Operator will provide remote participation.  It
> will be more accurate to say ICANN in both cases.
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> Best,
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> *--Elise*
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> *From: *<icann-csc-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Elaine Pruis <
> elainepruis at gmail.com>
> *Date: *Wednesday, September 6, 2017 at 3:30 PM
> *To: *"ICANN-CSC at icann.org" <ICANN-CSC at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[ICANN-CSC] Fwd: updated charter edits
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> Hello
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> Please find attached an updated version of the suggested edits to the CSC
> Charter for the internal review. You'll see that the agreed upon edits from
> the last call have been made.
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> There are two additional changes for discussion, item 6 (minor SLE
> changes) and 9 (a method for requesting travel support for f2f meetings for
> CSC members).
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> Please review and let's discuss via email. Hopefully we can agree on
> the wording in time for our meeting next week.
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> The CSC Charter Review team (Donna, Martin, Abdalla and Keith) would much
> appreciate our suggestions shortly after that.
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> Best
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> Elaine
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