[Internal-cg] (no subject)

[Daniel Karrenberg]

On 5.08.14 21:16 , Paul Wilson wrote:
> Thanks Alissa.  And Samantha.
> 
> It certainly needs editing because some information is missing; also because some was provided quite informally as part of individual personal introductions to the ICG.
> 
> It may be better to stick to information which can be well structured, and to remove the prose, in particular the "HOW PERSON WILL REPRESENT THEIR COMMUNITY IN THE ICG” column.  That information is available after all in the meeting proceedings, and will be more meaningful in that context.
> 
> Paul.

Paul,

personally I consider the 'prose' very worth having since it gives me
the opportunity to say what value I attach to the other information such
as nationality should that become necessary. I also personally consider
having this information readily available in one place much much more
important than the information about citizenship.

For full disclosure I attach the comments I sent to Samantha earlier. I
expect that other people did so as well and Samantha has not yet had the
opportunity to include their comments either.

Daniel

NB: This is no explicit or implied criticism of Samantha's work.


-------- Forwarded Message --------
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Minutes for Day 2 of 1st ICG Meeting
Date: Tue, 29 Jul 2014 06:52:37 +0200
From: Daniel Karrenberg <daniel.karrenberg at ripe.net>
To: Samantha Dickinson <samantha at linguasynaptica.com>

For the matrix:

how selected: replace with "By RSSAC:
http://london50.icann.org/en/schedule/minutes-rssac-24jun14-en.pdf"

how represent: add "see also:
http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/internal-cg/2014-July/000061.html"

financial disclosure: "Time and travel supported by the RIPE NCC. I do
not represent the RIPE NCC here."