[Internal-cg] charter version 5

[Patrik Fältström]

My only concern is with this text:

> While there is some overlap among all ofthese categories, each poses distinct organizational, operational and technical issues, and each tends to have distinct communities of interest and expertise. For those reasons it is best to have work on the three categories of IANA parameters proceed autonomously in parallel and be based in the respective communities.

 
I do not see the constituencies so very distinct. Where is gac? Where is SSAC? Where is ICC?

I do not mind having text referring to the respective PDPs but should not be used to exclude comments from those not directly involved in the PDPs. This also goes back to what I think ICANN need to improve.

Maybe you have talked about this (one case of "distinct" is removed, good) but I propose small change like:

While there is some overlap among all ofthese categories, each poses different organizational, operational and technical issues, and each tends to have different communities of interest and expertise. For those reasons it is best to have work on the three categories of IANA parameters proceed autonomously in parallel and be mainly based in the respective communities.

   Patrik

 
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