[IOT] IRP-IOT - Edits for clarity to public consultation text

Bernard Turcotte turcotte.bernard at gmail.com
Wed Jun 20 13:28:26 UTC 2018


Given there were no comments posted on this we will proceed, as proposed,
with using this version for the public consultation.

Thank You.

Bernard Turcotte
ICANN Staff Support to the IOT


David McAuley

On Fri, Jun 15, 2018 at 5:21 PM Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard at gmail.com>

> All,
> Staff are suggesting some edits to facilitate understanding of the issues
> on which we are asking for comments. These are being suggested based on our
> experience with public consultations and only meant to assist the reader in
> understanding what is being considered and should not change what is being
> proposed in any way.
> Please find the proposed red-lined changes in the attached document for
> your consideration.
> If you have any significant objections please post them to the list prior
> to Tuesday 19 June 2359UTC.
> If there are no significant objections by the deadline we will proceed
> with requesting the  posting the document for public consultation on
> Wednesday 20 June.
> If there are significant objections we will revert to the original text.
> Thank you.
> Bernard Turcotte
> ICANN Staff Support to the IRP-IOT
> for
> David McAuley
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