[ispcp] RV: EPDP Final Report - Round 2 - Non-Substantive Edits

Tue Mar 22 16:22:06 UTC 2022

Dear All,
Enclosed is the latest draft final report, line-numbered so you can reference your comments more easily.
I think that we have reached a reasonable compromise and I feel quite comfortable with this document.
Please let me know if you have any observation.
Best regards,
Osvaldo

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De: gnso-igo-wt [mailto:gnso-igo-wt-bounces at icann.org] En nombre de Berry Cobb via gnso-igo-wt
Enviado el: lunes, 21 de marzo de 2022 09:43 p.m.
Para: Chris Disspain via gnso-igo-wt
Asunto: [gnso-igo-wt] EPDP Final Report - Round 2 - Non-Substantive Edits
Importancia: Alta

Dear EPDP,

Please find attached a line-numbered version of the lastest draft Final Report. As noted on the call today and in parallel to the final phase of the consensus process, we are beginning round #2 of non-substantive edit proposals to the report. Instructions and a link to the submission table are below.

Please have any suggested revisions posted by 23:59 UTC, 24 March 2022. Staff will import the proposals and return an updated version by the next day the 25th to make ready for review at our next meeting on the 28th.

Link to Input Table: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1TIvh5MKOl7t8Q2Yb_VTqPVlRMhiZS0o6YMZtwXDYvsI/edit__;!!PtGJab4!q9lwWgdUEbc3Kupll5JS4z4eyEFlKUdkgb14OgtZN0jhLZ6oxd16wsJvKCOwB4gsc65tLus$>
*** If you do not have access, please request it. It will notify me and I will provide you with suggestion rights.
**** If you do not get access in a timely manner to the google doc, please follow the instructions below and send your suggested edits to the full email list as an alternative.

Instructions:

  1.  Please note your name and the group you represent in the "Group Submitting" column.
  2.  For the "Line Number(s)" column, denote the line numbers from the clean version of the PDF of the Final Report for which you want to suggest a revision. For sentences or paragraphs, it will be helpful to list the full range of line numbers.
  3.  In the last column, "Proposed Revision", please add your suggested edit or correction that you feel enhances or makes more clear the intent of the recommendation or supporting text without changing the intent. It should not be necessary to quote the text from the report. In more complex proposals, a rationale statement should be included to help inform the EPDP on why the edit should be made.
  4.  See the example in the first row.
  5.  Round #2 Edits scope: FULL REPORT.
  6.  Link<https://community.icann.org/display/GNSOIWT/Final+Report> to revision history.

Please let us know if you have any questions or need clarifications.

Thank you.

Mary, Steve, and Berry

Berry Cobb
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