[Neobrahmigp] IP review of Oriya LGR 20181220

Mon Feb 11 13:12:59 UTC 2019

Dear all,

After reviewing the feedback from IP, the LGR proposal for Oriya has been
updated with the action points which are mentioned below.

The document Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc Ver 2.11.doc  and
Proposal-Oriya-LGR-20190211_Doc
Ver 2.11.pdf is now renamed as version 2.11 is attached in this email.

*IP Feedback:* (1) The .docx proposal would still benefit if the citation
of specific characters would* as much as possible *include the code point,
glyph and character name (especially, for example, in 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and
3.9). This would make it much more easily read by non-Oriya reading people.

*Action Taken: *Updated the proposal with code point, glyph and character
name as much as possible (especially, for example, in 3.5, 3.6, 3.7, 3.8
and 3.9).

*IP Feedback:* (2)There is a missing space in the heading "10.3 Oriyaand
Telugu".

*Action Taken:* Updated a space in the heading "10.3 Oriya and Telugu".
This seems a technical issue. While converting from word to PDF, sometimes
spaces between words are not embedded in PDF version.

*IP Feedback:* This and many other instances of missing spaces and small
copy edits have been addressed by the suggested edits in the attached
document. The GP is encouraged to review and accept these or make
additional changes.

*Action Taken: *Updated missing spaces and small copy edits have been
addressed.

*IP Feedback:* (3)The discussion of variants vs. confusables could use some
small edits to align better with the terminology and explanation used
across the Root Zone LGR. (See attached document).

*Action Taken: *Accepted the small edits suggestion by IP.

*IP Feedback:* (4)Halant should be capitalized to match usage elsewhere.
(See attached document).

*Action Taken: *The LGR is now updated capitalized “H” in Halant.

*IP Feedback:* (5) Page 12, the fourth page of the Public Comments Feedback
for  ... Oriya, claims (in 3.4 and 3.6) that ISO 15919 is to be used for
lossless transliteration of the characters, but in fact the IPA seems to be
used everywhere for phonetic renderings, thus, for example, using j rather
than y.

*Action Taken: *ISO 15919 system is not used for transliteration of any
scripts in LGR proposal of NBGP for this purpose. Hence, the public
comments feedback doc
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m9MbBfNBQZAFc9SOYpt0lgeeyM3N-DsUP173J4Vb948/edit>
for Oriya (Odia) script is also updated to avoid such confusion going
forward regarding ISO15919 system for transliteration of Oriya (Odia).

*XML*

The updated XML passes our tool

No Action required

*TXT*

The label file has been verified.

No Action required

Further, I have added the following text after the first para in section 4,
as per the email from Dr Sarmad d*ated* 02-Feb-2019, s*ubject*:  Proposed
text for NBGP methodology after public comment (refer page no 09 and page
no 31)

The Oriya script LGR proposal was published for public comment to allow
those who had not participated in the NBGP to make their views known. The
NBGP analyzed all comments received to finalize the proposal. The analysis
of public comments can be accessed online given at [106].

Best Regards

Kuldeep Patnaik

On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 2:20 PM Kuldeep Patnaik <kuldeep.patnaik3 at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Thank you Dr Sarmad,
> I will revert to you soon.
>
> Best Regards
> Kuldeep Patnaik
>
> On Wed, Feb 6, 2019 at 8:45 AM Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain at icann.org>
> wrote:
>
>> Dear Kuldeep, all,
>>
>>
>>
>> Please find below (and attached) the review of the proposal by IP.
>> Kindly let us know if you have any queries.
>>
>>
>>
>> We look forward to the final version, incorporating the feedback.
>>
>>
>>
>> Regards,
>> Sarmad
>>
>>
>>
>>
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>>
>> To: Neo-Brahmi Generation Panel
>> From: Integration Panel
>> Subject: Updated Oriya Proposal dated 20181220
>>
>> The IP has reviewed the updated proposal and has a few additional
>> comments and suggestions as set out below and in the attached document
>> where suggested edits are shown in redline. Once these are reviewed,
>> accepted or altered by the GP, the proposal is ready to be finalized.
>>
>> *DOCX*
>>
>> (1) The .docx proposal would still benefit if the citation of specific
>> characters would* as much as possible *include the code point, glyph and
>> character name (especially, for example, in 3.6, 3.7, 3.8 and 3.9). This
>> would make it much more easily read by non-Oriya reading people.
>>
>> (2) There is a missing space in the heading "10.3 Oriyaand Telugu".
>>
>> This, and many other instances of missing spaces and small copy edits
>> have been addressed by the suggested edits in the attached document. The GP
>> is encouraged to review and accept these or make additional changes.
>>
>> (3) The discussion of variants vs. confusables could use some small edits
>> to align better with the terminology and explanation used across the Root
>> Zone LGR. (See attached document)
>>
>>
>>
>> (4) Halant should be capitalized to match usage elsewhere. (See attached
>> document).
>>
>>
>>
>> (5) Page 12, the fourth page of the Public Comments Feedback for  ...
>> Oriya, claims (in 3.4 and 3.6) that ISO 15919 is to be used for lossless
>> trasliteration of the characters, but in fact the IPA seems to be used
>> everywhere for phonetic renderings, thus for example using j rather than y.
>>
>>
>>
>> *XML*
>>
>> The updated XML passes our tool
>>
>>
>>
>> *TXT*
>>
>> The label file has been verified.
>>
>>
>> ------------------------------
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
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