[OFB-WG] REMINDER: VOTE CREDENTIALS: ALAC Statement on Third Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT3) Final Report

Thu Jul 30 07:27:17 UTC 2020

Hello,
Thanks Bastiaan,
I agree that your suggestion are not substantive but will help to understand better the document.
May we ask Joanna, Bastiaan and Ricardo with staff to finalise the document before sending as a comment?
THanks all.
All the best
SeB

Sébastien Bachollet
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EURALO Chair

> Le 29 juil. 2020 à 18:13, Bastiaan Goslings <b.goslings at gmail.com> a écrit :
> 
> Thanks, Ricardo
> 
> Fyi: staff, who knew I was not going to be on the OFB call, asked me as co-penholder to incorporate potential comments from the group afterwards. Which meant I would have to listen to the recording, assuming it would be quickly available. No problem. Of course no one knew that the group would support the last version of the draft as is, but the request from staff did imply to me that we at least had some time to do a(nother) final review. 
> 
> Anyway. I understand your point that, as there were no comments from the OFB WG, it was agreed to ask the ALAC to ratify the statement. I saw the message this morning, sent at 2AM CEST. 
> 
> I do not really have anything to add. I will leave it to others to decide whether my _editorial_ suggestions, which from my perspective can easily and quickly be incorporated before the deadline, are worth considering.
> 
> take care
> Bastiaan
> 
> 
>> On 29 Jul 2020, at 17:54, Ricardo Holmquist <rihogris at gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Bastiaan,
>> Yesterday, after the reading of the ATRT3 draft, there were no comments, thus it was agreed it will be the final draft, ready to be voted by ALAC. But, sure, you were part of the drafting team, and we were supposed to wait for you to make any arrangements after the OFBWG call. Of course there is the rush to vote before friday.
>> 
>> Best
>> 
>> Ricardo
>> 
>> El mié., 29 jul. 2020 17:36, Bastiaan Goslings <b.goslings at gmail.com> escribió:
>> Thanks, staff. 
>> 
>> A couple of comments, after going over the final draft before I support ratification.
>> 
>> - Under point 1;
>> 
>> 'With that, the ALAC supports the ATRT3 suggestion to introduce changes to the current structure of reviews, specifically by implementing a moratorium on launching any new Organizational and Specific Reviews until it has made a decision on this recommendation, as per Section 8 of the report).’
>> 
>> I assume the ‘it’ referred to here is the ICANN board? As it reads now, to me, it sounds like ‘it’ refers to the ALAC
>> 
>> As an alternative: ‘(…) , specifically by having the ICANN board implement a moratorium (…) until it has made a decision’ (etc)
>> 
>> 
>> - With regard to point 2:
>> 
>> This ('The ALAC fully endorses the recommendation’ (etc) does not follow logically from the introduction above point 1 ('we advise the ICANN Board to:’ and then come the 3 points)
>> 
>> As an alternative: remove the ’The ALAC fully endorses’ and replace with ‘Fully endorse'. You then get 'we advise the ICANN Board to: (…)  2. Fully endorse’ (etc)
>> 
>> 
>> - With regard to point 3:
>> 
>> This ('The ALAC shares’ (etc) does not follow logically either from the introduction above point 1 ('we advise the ICANN Board to:’ and then come the 3 points)
>> 
>> As an alternative: remove the ’The ALAC shares’ and replace with ’share’. You then get 'we advise the ICANN Board to: (…)  3. share the ATRT3 Review Team’s approach’ (etc)
>> 
>> 
>> (To make it even more clear, the 'we advise the ICANN Board to:’ could be added above both points 2 and 3 as well)
>> 
>> 
>> With regard to my point 2 and 3 remarks above, these of course only apply if we indeed want to explicitly state ''we advise the ICANN Board to’. If that is not the case, then we can remove the 'we advise the ICANN Board to:’ above point 1 and replace the ‘1. Swiftly implement ATRT3 recommendation to evolve both specific and organizational reviews as per Section 8 of the final report'  with 
>> 
>> ’The ALAC is of the opinion that the ATRT3 recommendation to evolve both specific and organizational reviews as per Section 8 of the final report should be swiftly implemented’
>> 
>> 
>> Hope this makes sense,
>> 
>> regards
>> Bastiaan
>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On 29 Jul 2020, at 16:29, ICANN At-Large Staff <noreply-110782 at bigpulse.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Bastiaan Goslings, 
>>> 
>>> This is to let you know that the ALAC statement on Third Accountability and Transparency Review Team (ATRT3) Final Report is now final. Maureen Hilyard, ALAC Chair, has asked the 15 ALAC members to ratify this final statement.
>>> 
>>> To read the final statement, please visit: https://community.icann.org/x/X4JIC
>>> 
>>> Please note that the ALAC ratification vote will open on 28 July 23:59 UTC and end on 31 July 2020 17:00 UTC.
>>> 
>>> To access the poll click this link: https://www.bigpulse.com/rr?c=3Nc1AKwvOoKq5RiofTmXBoyHSiQai3sM2n5SJg
>>> 
>>> Kind Regards,
>>> 
>>> ICANN Policy Staff in support of the At-Large Community
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