[RDS-WHOIS2-CommInterface] Reminder: deadline to submit subgroup report
Volker Greimann
vgreimann at key-systems.net
Mon Jun 11 15:16:48 UTC 2018
You are right, but I am not sure how easiness of drafting improves the
quality of the draft. I always feel it is better for the proposer of a
recommendation to take the first pitch to ensure the wording matches the
original intent.
Best,
Volker
Am 07.06.2018 um 19:09 schrieb Susan Kawaguchi:
> Hi Volker,
>
> I can add more rationale to the recommendation but it would be very
> helpful if you drafted the report since you are rapporteur for this
> subgroup. It is very easy to edit other's drafting but it takes much
> more time to draft the initial report.
>
> Once you have drafted the subgroup report I will add rationale.
>
> Susan
>
> On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 9:27 AM, Volker Greimann
> <vgreimann at key-systems.net <mailto:vgreimann at key-systems.net>> wrote:
>
> Hi Lisa,
>
> thanks for asking. No progress has been made at this point with
> regard to the completion of section 5. It would be helpful if the
> proposer of the recommendation would look into putting some more
> meat on the bones. As it stands, I would not support the
> recommendation myself since it is completely unsupported by any
> rationale, impact statement or feasability review. While I agree
> that the proposed metrics would be nice to have, I am unclear
> about the benefits.
>
> I also note the original recommendation does not request metrics.
> These metrics would have been helpful to our work in assessing the
> effectiveness of the common interface, but beyond that?
>
> If we stick to the recommendation, we should be clear that this is
> a recommendation targetting ICANN to provide better data on their
> portal, so its effectiveness can be better reviewed.
>
> Volker
>
>
> Am 02.06.2018 um 21:52 schrieb Lisa Phifer:
>> Hi Volker and Susan,
>>
>> How are things coming on a final update to the Common Interface
>> subgroup report?
>>
>> http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-comminterface/attachments/20180524/d6e8a7d5/Subgroup1-Rec11CommonInterface-Report-Draft2-0001.docx
>>
>> <http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-comminterface/attachments/20180524/d6e8a7d5/Subgroup1-Rec11CommonInterface-Report-Draft2-0001.docx>Does
>> the subgroup need to meet to finalize this report? Or do you plan
>> to send an updated report to the subgroup with a last call for
>> agreement or objections?
>>
>> Once agreed by the subgroup, staff can start folding the
>> subgroup's findings into draft slides for ICANN62.
>>
>> Please do let me know if I can be of any help to you in
>> progressing the subgroup's report -
>>
>> Best, Lisa
>>
>>
>> At 09:35 PM 5/24/2018, Lisa Phifer wrote:
>>> Volker, Susan -
>>>
>>> As requested, attached please find an updated draft of this
>>> subgroup's report which includes the common interface agreements
>>> reached at the F2F meeting.
>>>
>>> In addition, I have copied relevant text from the problem/issue
>>> section into the recommendations section (worded as may be
>>> appropriate for a recommendation). The subgroup should
>>> review/refine and then agree upon that recommendation - in
>>> particular, see highlighted placeholders that need to be fleshed
>>> out.
>>>
>>> Best, Lisa
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>> At 07:52 AM 5/23/2018, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:
>>>>>> Dear WHOIS1 Rec #11: Common Interface subgroup members,
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> We would like to kindly remind you that *tomorrow – 24 May
>>>>>> 23:59 UTC is the agreed deadline to submit your subgroup
>>>>>> report to the review team.
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> The latest version of your report is saved here:
>>>>>> https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604720/SK%20Final%20Subgroup1-Rec11CommonInterface-Report-Draft1.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1523632890000&api=v2
>>>>>> <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604720/SK%20Final%20Subgroup1-Rec11CommonInterface-Report-Draft1.docx?version=1&modificationDate=1523632890000&api=v2>
>>>>>> .
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> Your dedicated subgroup wiki page:
>>>>>> https://community.icann.org/x/8JlEB
>>>>>> <https://community.icann.org/x/8JlEB> .
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> Similar to the preparatory work for the draft report you
>>>>>> presented in Brussels, your ICANN support team is available
>>>>>> to help you reflect Brussels discussions into your final
>>>>>> report. If you need ICANN org to provide suggested language,
>>>>>> please reach out to us at rds-whois2-staff at icann.org
>>>>>> <mailto:rds-whois2-staff at icann.org> .
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> Kind regards,
>>>>>> Â
>>>>>> Jean-Baptiste
>>>>>> Â
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