[RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff] Review needed | Draft Report Public Announcement

[Alan Greenberg]

With a few exceptions below, it is fine.

- Note the three yellow highlighted sections in 
the attached copy, and invert the order in each 
to mention the WHOIS1 review prior to the new 
topics. That then matches the list of detailed 
topics below and the order in the report.

- The green highlighted are basically duplicates. 
Do we need both. They take up a lot of space.

- Shouldn't this list (or lists if both are 
included) include the Bylaws review item?

Alan


At 27/08/2018 02:11 PM, Jean-Baptiste Deroulez wrote:
>Dear leaders,
>
>Following up on today’s call and the adoption 
>of the RDS-WHOIS2 draft report, please find 
>attached the public comment announcement 
>proceeding for your review. This document, 
>divided in two sections: 1) Announcement (to 
>appear 
><https://www.icann.org/news/announcements>here) 
>2) Public Comment Proceeding Details (to be 
>published under 
><https://www.icann.org/public-comments>this 
>page), is submitted for your review in 
>preparation for the release of the draft report for public comment.
>
>Please submit any edits, comments on both 
>sections by Wednesday 27 August, 23:59 UTC. If 
>none are received, the attached version will be considered approved.
>
>Kind regards,
>
>Jean-Baptiste
>
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