[RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff] Draft report

[Jean-Baptiste Deroulez]

Hi Alan,

Please find the updated final report draft attached.

I updated references to sections, and believe all orphans titles have now been addressed.

I had already ensured in the previous version that the Recs in the Exec summary are the same as the ones in the body of the report.

Jean-Baptiste

From: RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff <rds-whois2-rt-leadership_staff-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
Date: Saturday, March 2, 2019 at 7:38 AM
To: RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership <rds-whois2-rt-leadership_staff at icann.org>
Subject: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT-Leadership_Staff] Draft report

Hi Jean-Baptiste,

As usual, this took longer than expected.

There are a number of changes that I made please review them all to make sure what I wrote makes sense and accept the changes if they look ok.

The section on Consumer Trust is the wrong one. It needs to be completely replaced with the correct one from https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J2kdCRH1ftDd78ZoYrYcwA8HCrMEgPyaUW8DsKLXdyE/edit#heading=h.45jfvxd [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1J2kdCRH1ftDd78ZoYrYcwA8HCrMEgPyaUW8DsKLXdyE_edit-23heading-3Dh.45jfvxd&d=DwMFAg&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=a5VfrQZP4r0Kte2xBJT17IgRyRBHECC3vHSuFP_QBqD22G4dgkHhRZBEhshbjycD&m=zdkguJ8Cy2qQn159G43bX9LQL-ixhojQBFWEJ70WmAo&s=tAFbQyRycFC_b2NIhl1WHBSza6uJNmLM3fvPssZzx6w&e=> . If you have not already done so, please proof read it (it is not long if you skip the parts that are direct quotes from WHOIS1).

If Stephanie or Volker raise any objections, of course the particular consensus level and the general description will need to be changed.

Once all of that is done, please check for orphan titles and such (I fixed a few I saw).

Also if you have not already done it before you sent this version to me, please ensure that the Recs in the Exec summary are the same as the ones in the body.

With that, we should be close to finished.

Alan


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