[RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session Description

Tue May 29 13:35:32 UTC 2018

I agree with Cathrins changes and have none to offer myself.

Am 29.05.2018 um 14:50 schrieb SUN Lili:
>
> It looks fine, no further comments.
>
> *From:*RDS-WHOIS2-RT [mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces at icann.org] *On 
> Behalf Of *Cathrin.BAUER-BULST at ec.europa.eu
> *Sent:* Tuesday, 29 May, 2018 2:06 PM
> *To:* jean-baptiste.deroulez at icann.org; rds-whois2-rt at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement 
> Session Description
>
> Dear all,
>
> Some small edits proposed in the text below (in bold and red) to 
> clarify 1) the "this" in the second sentence and 2) that this 
> engagement session is one opportunity to provide feedback (i.e., there 
> will be more) just to avoid misunderstanding.
>
> All best
>
> Cathrin
>
> *From:*RDS-WHOIS2-RT [mailto:rds-whois2-rt-bounces at icann.org] *On 
> Behalf Of *Jean-Baptiste Deroulez
> *Sent:* Monday, May 28, 2018 10:15 PM
> *To:* RDS WHOIS2-RT List
> *Subject:* [RDS-WHOIS2-RT] REVIEW NEEDED: ICANN62 Engagement Session 
> Description
>
> Dear Review Team members,
>
> Following the action item identified today on plenary call #28 
> <https://community.icann.org/x/MgMFBQ>, please review the below 
> updated ICANN62 engagement session description and confirm by 
> *_tomorrow, Tuesday 29 May 2018 23:59 UTC_* whether you have any 
> edits/comments.
>
> /Join a discussion with the Registration Directory Service Review team 
> (RDS-WHOIS2). /
>
> /The Registration Directory Service Review, formerly known as "WHOIS" 
> (RDS-WHOIS2) is mandated by the ICANN Bylaws/*.**, this**The scope of 
> its work*/includes assessing how the recommendations of the first 
> WHOIS Review were carried out, as well as assessing the effectiveness 
> of the gTLD registry directory service and whether its implementation 
> meets the legitimate needs of law enforcement, promoting consumer 
> trust and safeguarding registrant data. The RDS-WHOIS2 Review Team 
> will update the community on its findings to date and seek input on 
> its findings as well as address any questions pertaining to its scope 
> and work plan. This is /*your**oneopportunity for you*///to provide 
> input into the RDS-WHOIS2 work. /
>
> //
>
> /For more information, please visit the RDS-WHOIS2 wiki 
> https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/RDS-WHOIS2+Review/. /
>
> //
>
> /Learn more about opportunities to participate in RDS-WHOIS2 work at: 
> https://community.icann.org/display/WHO/Observers. /
>
> In absence of comments/edits, the ICANN62 engagement session 
> description will be considered approved.
>
> Kind regards,
>
> Jean-Baptiste
>
> ***************************************************************************************************
> This message, and any attachment contained, are confidential and 
> subject of legal privilege. It may be used solely for the designated 
> police/justice purpose and by the individual or entity to whom it is 
> addressed. The information is not to be disseminated to another agency 
> or third party without the author’s consent, and must not be retained 
> longer than is necessary for the fulfilment of the purpose for which 
> the information is to be used. All practicable steps shall be taken by 
> the recipients to ensure that information is protected against 
> unauthorised access or processing. INTERPOL reserves the right to 
> enquire about the use of the information provided.
> If you are not the intended recipient, be advised that you have 
> received this message in error. In such a case, you should not print 
> it, copy it, make any use of it or disclose it, but please notify us 
> immediately and delete the message from any computer.
> *************************************************************************************************
>
>
> _______________________________________________
> RDS-WHOIS2-RT mailing list
> RDS-WHOIS2-RT at icann.org
> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rds-whois2-rt

-- 
Bei weiteren Fragen stehen wir Ihnen gerne zur Verfügung.

Mit freundlichen Grüßen,

Volker A. Greimann
- Rechtsabteilung -

Key-Systems GmbH
Im Oberen Werk 1
66386 St. Ingbert
Tel.: +49 (0) 6894 - 9396 901
Fax.: +49 (0) 6894 - 9396 851
Email: vgreimann at key-systems.net

Web: www.key-systems.net / www.RRPproxy.net
www.domaindiscount24.com / www.BrandShelter.com

Folgen Sie uns bei Twitter oder werden Sie unser Fan bei Facebook:
www.facebook.com/KeySystems
www.twitter.com/key_systems

Geschäftsführer: Alexander Siffrin
Handelsregister Nr.: HR B 18835 - Saarbruecken
Umsatzsteuer ID.: DE211006534

Member of the KEYDRIVE GROUP
www.keydrive.lu

Der Inhalt dieser Nachricht ist vertraulich und nur für den angegebenen Empfänger bestimmt. Jede Form der Kenntnisgabe, Veröffentlichung oder Weitergabe an Dritte durch den Empfänger ist unzulässig. Sollte diese Nachricht nicht für Sie bestimmt sein, so bitten wir Sie, sich mit uns per E-Mail oder telefonisch in Verbindung zu setzen.

--------------------------------------------

Should you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.

Best regards,

Volker A. Greimann
- legal department -

Key-Systems GmbH
Im Oberen Werk 1
66386 St. Ingbert
Tel.: +49 (0) 6894 - 9396 901
Fax.: +49 (0) 6894 - 9396 851
Email: vgreimann at key-systems.net

Web: www.key-systems.net / www.RRPproxy.net
www.domaindiscount24.com / www.BrandShelter.com

Follow us on Twitter or join our fan community on Facebook and stay updated:
www.facebook.com/KeySystems
www.twitter.com/key_systems

CEO: Alexander Siffrin
Registration No.: HR B 18835 - Saarbruecken
V.A.T. ID.: DE211006534

Member of the KEYDRIVE GROUP
www.keydrive.lu

This e-mail and its attachments is intended only for the person to whom it is addressed. Furthermore it is not permitted to publish any content of this email. You must not use, disclose, copy, print or rely on this e-mail. If an addressing or transmission error has misdirected this e-mail, kindly notify the author by replying to this e-mail or contacting us by telephone.

-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/rds-whois2-rt/attachments/20180529/78800d72/attachment-0001.html>