[UA-discuss] UA Fact Sheet

[Mark Svancarek]

I’ve added more updates.

From: Ram Mohan [mailto:rmohan at afilias.info]
Sent: Monday, October 5, 2015 1:44 PM
To: Mark Svancarek; Don Hollander; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger; kurt at kjpritz.com; judy.song at neustar.biz
Cc: UA-discuss at icann.org
Subject: RE: UA Fact Sheet

I made extensive edits on top of Mark’s changes.

I’m cc’ing the full UASG distro, it’s useful to get more eyes on this.

-Ram

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From: Mark Svancarek [mailto:marksv at microsoft.com<mailto:marksv at microsoft.com>]
Sent: Monday, October 05, 2015 1:00 PM
To: Don Hollander <don.hollander at icann.org<mailto:don.hollander at icann.org>>; Ram Mohan <rmohan at afilias.info<mailto:rmohan at afilias.info>>; Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka at verisign.com<mailto:dtantanaka at verisign.com>>; Brent London <brentlondon at google.com<mailto:brentlondon at google.com>>; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA) <Carolyn.Nguyen at microsoft.com<mailto:Carolyn.Nguyen at microsoft.com>>; Christian Dawson <dawson at i2coalition.com<mailto:dawson at i2coalition.com>>; Richard Merdinger <rmerdinger at godaddy.com<mailto:rmerdinger at godaddy.com>>; kurt at kjpritz.com<mailto:kurt at kjpritz.com>; judy.song at neustar.biz<mailto:judy.song at neustar.biz>
Subject: RE: UA Fact Sheet

My edits and comments are in the document.  I’m not seeing my own redlining, so hopefully y’all will be able to see what I changed.

I do think it’s clear enough right now [as edited by me ;-) ].

/marksv

From: Don Hollander [mailto:don.hollander at icann.org]
Sent: Monday, October 5, 2015 12:08 AM
To: Ram Mohan; Tan Tanaka, Dennis; Brent London; Carolyn Nguyen (LCA); Mark Svancarek; Christian Dawson; Richard Merdinger; kurt at kjpritz.com<mailto:kurt at kjpritz.com>; judy.song at neustar.biz<mailto:judy.song at neustar.biz>
Subject: UA Fact Sheet

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8/edit<https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3a%2f%2fdocs.google.com%2fdocument%2fd%2f1a_Agj-CLwM3E0CU-D2tKYCUPtPvNKKvIDKp3fle6EQ8%2fedit&data=01%7c01%7cmarksv%40microsoft.com%7cd092604126d94a9414de08d2cdc5dbcc%7c72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7c1&sdata=ZL7Gsn7hMQyjvCFnOreoLMCBa3mBVBggo0KOgMKfVwA%3d>

The above link refers.

We have been working to get this document ready for some weeks now.  We took the original text that was used during the ICANN meeting in Toronto and have been massaging it.

There’s still no clarity and precious little time left to a) format it and b) print it.   But, I think it may still be possible.

Your prompt review and, if necessary, revision would be very welcome.

Once this is done, then we can also work to get it prepared for the IGF - including getting some translation done.

Thanks so much.

Don


PS: This distribution list includes those who have contributed comments as well as those who volunteered to review UASG documentation.


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