[IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report

[Stephanie Perrin]

My apologies Jamie, In my haste to push send I neglected to proof 
this...there was a sentence fragment on page 1, here is an amended 
version with the whole sentence.
Stephanie
On 2015-10-05 12:15, Jamie Hedlund wrote:
> Thanks, Stephanie.
>
> Jamie Hedlund
> VP, Strategic Programs
> Global Domains Division
> ICANN
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> jamie.hedlund at icann.org
>
> From: Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca 
> <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>>
> Date: Monday, October 5, 2015 at 12:05
> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>, "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>" 
> <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>
> ANd here it is.
> SP
> On 2015-10-05 10:20, Jamie Hedlund wrote:
>> All,
>>
>> Just an FYI that the draft report should be posted for public comment 
>> today.
>>
>> Stephanie,
>>
>> We still have not received your statement for the draft report. It 
>> has been two weeks now so I think we need to push forward. Thanks.
>>
>> Best,
>> Jamie
>>
>> Jamie Hedlund
>> VP, Strategic Programs
>> Global Domains Division
>> ICANN
>> +1.202.374.3969 (m)
>> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
>> jamie.hedlund at icann.org
>>
>> From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Stephanie 
>> Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca 
>> <mailto:stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca>>
>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 19:12
>> To: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
>> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>
>> My apologies for not getting my comments in by now. I have been 
>> preoccupied with the birth of my first grandchild, and while I am 
>> dedicated to ICANN this has not been top of mind.  Can you tell me 
>> what the deadline is for receiving a statement from me, which might 
>> be an appendix or a stakeholder view or a minority report.  Frankly 
>> my priority is to have it included, although I  do have sympathy for 
>> Chris's position re voting and minority views.
>> Kind regards, Stephanie Perrin
>>
>> On 2015-09-17 14:37, Jamie Hedlund wrote:
>>> Thank you, Allen.
>>>
>>> In light of the extensive edits, please review and indicate whether 
>>> you have any concerns or objections. Thank you.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Jamie
>>>
>>> Jamie Hedlund
>>> VP, Strategic Programs
>>> Global Domains Division
>>> ICANN
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>>> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
>>> jamie.hedlund at icann.org
>>>
>>> From: Allen Grogan <allen.grogan at icann.org>
>>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:31
>>> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org>, Christopher Wilkinson 
>>> <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
>>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
>>> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
>>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>>
>>> Can't guarantee the accuracy, but I believe the attached redline 
>>> reflects the changes proposed by Christopher.  Note that some 
>>> language consisting of hyperlinks in the original document shows up 
>>> here in blue (meaning it looks like it is a change to the document 
>>> even though it isn't).
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
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>>> From: <whois-iag-volunteers-bounces at icann.org> on behalf of Jamie 
>>> Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org>
>>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 11:14 AM
>>> To: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu 
>>> <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
>>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
>>> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
>>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>>
>>> Christopher,
>>>
>>> I will do my best to identify your changes.
>>>
>>> Regarding your Appendix 3 and other requests to provide a minority 
>>> statement, it does not seem appropriate to include these in a 
>>> document on which public comment is sought. Rather, minority 
>>> statements are incorporated into final reports. At that point, 
>>> public comments have been considered and the group has identified 
>>> where there is consensus. It would be appropriate for minority views 
>>> to be submitted as public comment. If, after taking into account the 
>>> universe of public comments, these views do not generate consensus 
>>> support, they would be ripe for attachment to the final report as 
>>> minority statements.
>>>
>>> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns with this 
>>> approach. Thank you.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Jamie
>>>
>>> Jamie Hedlund
>>> VP, Strategic Programs
>>> Global Domains Division
>>> ICANN
>>> +1.202.374.3969 (m)
>>> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
>>> jamie.hedlund at icann.org
>>>
>>> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu 
>>> <mailto:cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>>
>>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 14:00
>>> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org 
>>> <mailto:jamie.hedlund at icann.org>>
>>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org 
>>> <mailto:whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>>
>>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>>
>>> No, Jamie, there are a number of amendments and additions in the 
>>> body of the text.
>>>
>>> Since your version is in .docx and my edits are in .odt, track 
>>> changes does not seem to work.
>>> (I do not know how to do 'red-lining')
>>>
>>> I suggest that if you do a 'compare documents' you will get the changes.
>>>
>>> Otherwise: Search for 'N.B.'  and for 'applicable'' and you will get 
>>> most of them.
>>>
>>> Regards
>>>
>>> CW
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 17 Sep 2015, at 19:50, Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Christopher,
>>>>
>>>> Thank you. Could you please confirm that the only change you made 
>>>> to the base text was the addition of Appendix 3? Since the document 
>>>> is not redlined I wanted to make sure we captured your proposed 
>>>> edits. Thanks again.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>> Jamie
>>>>
>>>> Jamie Hedlund
>>>> VP, Strategic Programs
>>>> Global Domains Division
>>>> ICANN
>>>> +1.202.374.3969 (m)
>>>> +1.202.570.7125 (d)
>>>> jamie.hedlund at icann.org
>>>>
>>>> From: Christopher Wilkinson <cw at christopherwilkinson.eu>
>>>> Date: Thursday, September 17, 2015 at 13:24
>>>> To: Jamie Hedlund <jamie.hedlund at icann.org>
>>>> Cc: "whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org" <whois-iag-volunteers at icann.org>
>>>> Subject: Re: [IAG-WHOIS conflicts] Draft preliminary report
>>>>
>>>> Good evening:
>>>>
>>>> Please find attached my edits to the draft preliminary report.
>>>>
>>>> With many thanks for your attention
>>>>
>>>> Regards
>>>>
>>>> Christopher Wilkinson
>>>>
>>>
>>>
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