[WP1] Content Draft with Comments and Tracked Changes - next (Final) draft out 0300 Friday UTC

[Roelof Meijer]

Dear Jordan, all,

I couldn’t attend the call, so I probably missed something.
But how did we end up with the two law firms we hire stating: „On balance, “member” organization provides the clearest path for the ICANN community to exercise the mechanisms and powers under consideration. „ and  our rapporteur concluding: "Following the CCWG meeting on 10 April, the rapporteur had assumed there would be clarity regarding the proposed mechanism. This has not occurred„


Best,

Roelof

From: Jordan Carter <jordan at internetnz.net.nz<mailto:jordan at internetnz.net.nz>>
Date: donderdag 16 april 2015 23:10
To: "wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>" <wp1 at icann.org<mailto:wp1 at icann.org>>
Subject: [WP1] Content Draft with Comments and Tracked Changes - next (Final) draft out 0300 Friday UTC

Hi eveyone

Thanks for the call just now.

Attached is the working document.

Please review if you are inclined. If you have specific comments please raise them ON THE LIST rather than just to me, so anyone else can react, and I will take into account any comments on THIS version received by 0200 UTC on Friday.

I will take these comments, clean the document up, do what I can in the time available to add things like the tables / options for votes, and then...

... and then circulate a nice clean Final Draft for you (and a mark up showing what has changed from V3) at around 0300 UTC on Friday.

Then you will have 21h to make any final comments or thoughts.

Then, I'll make final adjustments and send it to the co-chairs and staff, or wherever they tell us to send it, for incorporation in the full document.

This isn't perfect work folks, but it's pretty darn good given the pace at which we are working.  Thank you for all the effort represented here.

cheers
Jordan

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