[WP2] revised IRP checklist based on call

[David Post]

My comments on Becky's paper (added to the earlier comments) attached.
David



At 07:28 AM 7/23/2015, Malcolm Hutty wrote:
>Comments on Becky's paper attached.
>
>
>On 23/07/2015 02:29, McAuley, David wrote:
> > Hi Becky,
> >
> >
> >
> > I have been out of the loop these past four hours for a family matter,
> > celebration.
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> > I offer a few comments attached in track changes.
> >
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> > Thanks all, especially Becky, for the incredible work on this today.
> >
> >
> >
> > David McAuley
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> >
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> > *From:*wp2-bounces at icann.org [mailto:wp2-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf
> > Of *Burr, Becky
> > *Sent:* Wednesday, July 22, 2015 5:02 PM
> > *To:* wp2 at icann.org
> > *Subject:* [WP2] revised IRP checklist based on call
> > *Importance:* High
> >
> >
> >
> > Please review and comment.  Note that some things are highlighted for
> > further discussion.
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> >
> >
> > Also, please review Greg’s proposed bylaw markup ­ I thhink it is a very
> > handy tool to make sure we’ve covered the basic bases.
> >
> >
> >
> > J. Beckwith Burr
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