[WP2] Lawyers markup of IRP checklist

[Burr, Becky]

Ok, do you object to publishing the checklist as a highlights document?

J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz






On 7/30/15, 8:24 AM, "Malcolm Hutty" <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:

>Becky,
>
>I'm surprised to see the lawyers working on this "Checklist", surely
>this document was just a working document, and not intended for
>inclusion in the final report?
>
>Do I mistake your intention?
>
>I have just seen the wiki page for building the final report
>https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_p
>ages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D53783460&d=AwIF-g&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw
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>This also lists this checklist as the WP2's input to the report on the
>IRP.
>
>I was hoping to see the attached draft bylaws "28 July Independent
>Review Bylaw BB compilation" (or any successor draft) listed there
>instead.
>
>Please could you confirm that that is your intention?
>
>Could you please submit this document and ask the staff to update this
>wiki asap?
>
>We do not want people to start challenging our input to the final paper
>on the grounds it hasn't been made available to the CCWG plenary in time.
>
>For the record, I do not regard the Checklist document as complete,
>either in terms of being comprehensive as to the issues we have
>addressed in the other document, nor in terms of containing sufficient
>detail.
>
>We're getting very close to the Chair's intended freeze date, and not
>having text visibly submitted, and having the lawyer's working on
>something else, is making me nervous. We don't have the time to allow
>misunderstandings to develop at this stage.
>
>Malcolm.
>
>
>
>On 30/07/2015 12:24, Burr, Becky wrote:
>> I have gone through the changes proposed by counsel.  Most of them are
>> wording changes and not objectionable from my perspective.  There is one
>> substantive addition on independence introduced in the qualifications
>> section.  We have not discussed this and I think it is addressed in the
>> current checklist, so I propose not to take that change.  Any other
>> thoughts on this?
>> 
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> 
>> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>> 
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>> 
>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:
>> +1.202.352.6367  / becky.burr at neustar.biz
>> <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz
>> 
>> 
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