[WP2] Lawyers markup of IRP checklist

Thu Jul 30 15:02:04 UTC 2015

Will do Izumi

J. Beckwith Burr
Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz

On 7/30/15, 10:52 AM, "Izumi Okutani" <izumi at nic.ad.jp> wrote:

>Becky,
>
>
>As a follow up from Paris and my previous e-mail -
>
>May I request to add a language in the IRP to keep the number resources
>related issues to be out of scope of the IRP?
>I recall this was agreed in Paris and would be helpful to have it
>reflected in the IRP document.
>
>> 1. Scope of Authority
>> The role of the Independent Review Process (IRP) will be to:
>> - Determine whether ICANN has acted (or has failed to act) in violation
>>of its Bylaws; and
>> - Hearing claims involving rights of the Sole Member under the Bylaws
>>(subject to voting thresholds)
>>
>> [Add]
>> - Disputes related to Internet number resources are out of scope of the
>>IRP.
>
>
>I would like to suggest the same text for reconsideration para 07.
>
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>CURRENT:
>In case of including the global number resources policy in its scope,
>further considerations
>should be made of its implications. The bottom up policy development
>process and its
>forum for the number resources is outside the ICANN, even though the
>ICANN Board
>approves its global policies, and the same mechanisms as the names
>related policies may
>not be applicable
>
>SUGGESTED:
>Disputes related to Internet number resources are out of scope of the IRP.
>
>
>Thanks for all your work!
>
>
>Izumi on behalf of the ASO reps
>
>On 2015/07/30 22:53, Burr, Becky wrote:
>> Ok, do you object to publishing the checklist as a highlights document?
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:  +1.202.352.6367  /
>> becky.burr at neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On 7/30/15, 8:24 AM, "Malcolm Hutty" <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:
>> 
>>> Becky,
>>>
>>> I'm surprised to see the lawyers working on this "Checklist", surely
>>> this document was just a working document, and not intended for
>>> inclusion in the final report?
>>>
>>> Do I mistake your intention?
>>>
>>> I have just seen the wiki page for building the final report
>>> 
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>>> This also lists this checklist as the WP2's input to the report on the
>>> IRP.
>>>
>>> I was hoping to see the attached draft bylaws "28 July Independent
>>> Review Bylaw BB compilation" (or any successor draft) listed there
>>> instead.
>>>
>>> Please could you confirm that that is your intention?
>>>
>>> Could you please submit this document and ask the staff to update this
>>> wiki asap?
>>>
>>> We do not want people to start challenging our input to the final paper
>>> on the grounds it hasn't been made available to the CCWG plenary in
>>>time.
>>>
>>> For the record, I do not regard the Checklist document as complete,
>>> either in terms of being comprehensive as to the issues we have
>>> addressed in the other document, nor in terms of containing sufficient
>>> detail.
>>>
>>> We're getting very close to the Chair's intended freeze date, and not
>>> having text visibly submitted, and having the lawyer's working on
>>> something else, is making me nervous. We don't have the time to allow
>>> misunderstandings to develop at this stage.
>>>
>>> Malcolm.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 30/07/2015 12:24, Burr, Becky wrote:
>>>> I have gone through the changes proposed by counsel.  Most of them are
>>>> wording changes and not objectionable from my perspective.  There is
>>>>one
>>>> substantive addition on independence introduced in the qualifications
>>>> section.  We have not discussed this and I think it is addressed in
>>>>the
>>>> current checklist, so I propose not to take that change.  Any other
>>>> thoughts on this?
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> J. Beckwith Burr
>>>>
>>>> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>>>>
>>>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
>>>>
>>>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:
>>>> +1.202.352.6367  / becky.burr at neustar.biz
>>>> <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz
>>>>
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