[WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work

[Malcolm Hutty]

On 30/07/2015 17:49, Burr, Becky wrote:
> With huge apologies for late delivery, I’ve attached a draft of the
> report text revised to reflect our decisions.  I am willing to put the
> draft bylaws language in the report as an appendix, but I don’t think
> its fully cooked right now.

Dear Becky,

Thank you for this, which crossed with my private message to you.

Please find attached a marked up version. My changes are mainly
references to items that we agreed to include in the draft bylaws
language, but are not mentioned in your text.

I also propose one additional paragraph of introduction, rebutting the
suggestion that this moves us from a multistakeholder body to create an
International Court with its own body of international law.

Regarding the "cookedness" of the draft bylaws language, we did go
through it line-by-line and make our respective compromises and formed a
consensus. Do you really propose to re-open those issues? Or do you just
mean reformatting it for redlining?

Malcolm.


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