[WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work

[Burr, Becky]

NOT SURE WHAT IS GOING ON.  Can you see the redline in the doc Jordan just
sent
J. Beckwith Burr
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On 7/30/15, 2:15 PM, "Malcolm Hutty" <malcolm at linx.net> wrote:

>
>
>On 30/07/2015 17:49, Burr, Becky wrote:
>> With huge apologies for late delivery, I¹ve attached a draft of the
>> report text revised to reflect our decisions.  I am willing to put the
>> draft bylaws language in the report as an appendix, but I don¹t think
>> its fully cooked right now.
>
>Dear Becky,
>
>Thank you for this, which crossed with my private message to you.
>
>Please find attached a marked up version. My changes are mainly
>references to items that we agreed to include in the draft bylaws
>language, but are not mentioned in your text.
>
>I also propose one additional paragraph of introduction, rebutting the
>suggestion that this moves us from a multistakeholder body to create an
>International Court with its own body of international law.
>
>Regarding the "cookedness" of the draft bylaws language, we did go
>through it line-by-line and make our respective compromises and formed a
>consensus. Do you really propose to re-open those issues? Or do you just
>mean reformatting it for redlining?
>
>Malcolm.
>
>
>> 
>> J. Beckwith Burr
>> 
>> *Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer
>> 
>> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006
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>> Office: + 1.202.533.2932  Mobile:
>> +1.202.352.6367  / becky.burr at neustar.biz
>> <mailto:becky.burr at neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz
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