[Wp4] WP4 Deliverable: Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human RIghts

[León Felipe Sánchez Ambía]

Dear Greg,

Thank you, Tatiana, Niels, Matthew and David for this new document. I think it's a great document that, from my perspective, appropriately reflects the work done in our WP4 and suggests concrete solutions and steps forward. 

Will wait for others to comment but I would say it's ok to be delivered and shared with the larger CCWG. 

Thanks to all in the WP. You have all made an outstanding job!

Kind regards ,


León

> El 02/11/2015, a las 7:36 p.m., Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> escribió:
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> All:
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> Attached are Word and PDF versions of a proposed final draft of the deliverable of WP4, which is intended to become part of the next Report of the CCWG.
> 
> Niels and Tatiana and Matt went through the document after our call and edited and resolved the proposed changes in the document.  I followed with further edits and formatting work.  I believe that all of us sought to be neutral rapporteurs carrying out the sense of today's call and the work of our group.
> 
> I felt that we needed a section which specifically set out the process and results of our discussions on refining the language of the Bylaw, rather than leaving this to our recommendations in the final section of the document.  Therefore, I took the liberty of creating such a section, and hope that you will find that this section reflects our work.
> 
> This document also remains available on Google Drive.
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> I look forward to any comments.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Greg
> <Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human Rights.docx>
> <Elaborating an ICANN Commitment to Human Rights.pdf>
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