[Wp4] Draft analysis of the public comments: invitation to contribute

[Niels ten Oever]

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Dear all,

With the deadline drawing near Tatiana and I have made new additions
to the document in which the comments are summarized. This time we
have provided a draft analysis of the comments in line with the
'DelBianco Postulate' as proposed by Greg (thanks for that!).

We have two concrete question for additions to the document to Bernard
and/or Leon: (1.) to summarize the outcomes of the poll on rights
language, and (2.) to provide a language proposal for the metrics.

We would like to reiterate this is a draft text, simply to help us
have a constructive and productive discussions and hopefully come to
good decisions on our submission to the CCWG in the call later today.
Additions, contributions and corrections before the call are of course
very much welcomed.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qGYKB3d2pjx0iFGj8a8lywgM7WgYqTpis_4-
ldkbtg8/edit?usp=sharing


or in short form:

http://is.gd/wp4delbianco

Best,

Niels





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Niels ten Oever
Head of Digital

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www.article19.org

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