[Wp4] Agenda for our call

[Greg Shatan]

All,

As promised, here is the document I propose as the starting point for our
drafting.  Since the portion where I edited down the comment analysis is
difficult to read in the marked version, I've also included a clean version.

I look forward to our call.

Greg

On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 4:30 AM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
wrote:

> Leon and all,
>
> On point 3, I don't understand why we would be adding to or amending the
> Second Public Comment document.  This document has now been published as
> part of the CCWG's overall review of the public comments.  I think this
> document is pretty much closed.
>
> On the other hand, we were working on a rationale document in a Google Doc
> before the public comment analysis and then Dublin took over our lives.  I
> think what we need to do is work on a document that uses as its starting
> point (i) the second draft report section on human rights, (ii) pieces of
> the rationale document, (iii) a fairly brief discussion/analysis of the
> comments and (iv) the new material provided by Leon.  The ultimate goal
> should be to turn this into the human rights section of the next draft of
> the report.  I've been working on such a document and should have a draft
> shortly.  I won't have it as far along as I'd hoped, due to a medical
> emergency in my family, but hopefully it will be far enough along to give a
> sense of where it could go.
>
> Greg
>
> On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 3:29 AM, León Felipe Sánchez Ambía <
> leonfelipe at sanchez.mx> wrote:
>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> In anticipation for our call, I suggest the following agenda:
>>
>> 1. Welcome
>> 2. Explanation by Paul Twomey on practical steps involved in changes of
>> TLD operator (focused on ccTLD)
>> 3. Review of proposed addition to our PC2 document
>> 4 AOB
>>
>> Of course, and as usual, this agenda is a suggestion and open for
>> amendments.
>>
>> Staff,
>>
>> Please be ready to display the document in the AC room.
>>
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>>
>>
>> León
>>
>>
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