[Wp4] Agenda for our call

[Dr. Tatiana Tropina]

Hi Greg,
thanks a lot for providing this starting point for the rationale
document and for pointing out that we have to proceed with what is meant
to be "explanatory" document for the bylaw language. Would it be
possible to share this new draft (clean version) as a Google doc, so
anyone can work on it after (and during, may be) the call? I think
Google docs were really helpful in our previous work. Only if you have
time to do this, of course. Thanks a million!
I also believe that we might consider changing the structure of the part
which was meant to be the rationale document (the text from the old
Google doc). I remember there were some comments and suggestion for
amending/restructuring this "rationale" part in the Google doc itself
and on the WP4 calls.  However, this can be discussed during the call.
Or any time later.
Looking forward to the call.
Cheers
Tanya

On 30/10/15 08:04, Greg Shatan wrote:
> All,
>
> As promised, here is the document I propose as the starting point for
> our drafting.  Since the portion where I edited down the comment
> analysis is difficult to read in the marked version, I've also
> included a clean version.
>
> I look forward to our call.
>
> Greg
>
> On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 4:30 AM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com
> <mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com>> wrote:
>
>     Leon and all,
>
>     On point 3, I don't understand why we would be adding to or
>     amending the Second Public Comment document.  This document has
>     now been published as part of the CCWG's overall review of the
>     public comments.  I think this document is pretty much closed.
>
>     On the other hand, we were working on a rationale document in a
>     Google Doc before the public comment analysis and then Dublin took
>     over our lives.  I think what we need to do is work on a document
>     that uses as its starting point (i) the second draft report
>     section on human rights, (ii) pieces of the rationale document,
>     (iii) a fairly brief discussion/analysis of the comments and (iv)
>     the new material provided by Leon.  The ultimate goal should be to
>     turn this into the human rights section of the next draft of the
>     report.  I've been working on such a document and should have a
>     draft shortly.  I won't have it as far along as I'd hoped, due to
>     a medical emergency in my family, but hopefully it will be far
>     enough along to give a sense of where it could go.
>
>     Greg 
>
>     On Fri, Oct 30, 2015 at 3:29 AM, León Felipe Sánchez Ambía
>     <leonfelipe at sanchez.mx <mailto:leonfelipe at sanchez.mx>> wrote:
>
>         Dear all,
>
>         In anticipation for our call, I suggest the following agenda:
>
>         1. Welcome
>         2. Explanation by Paul Twomey on practical steps involved in
>         changes of TLD operator (focused on ccTLD)
>         3. Review of proposed addition to our PC2 document
>         4 AOB
>
>         Of course, and as usual, this agenda is a suggestion and open
>         for amendments.
>
>         Staff,
>
>         Please be ready to display the document in the AC room.
>
>
>         Best regards,
>
>
>
>         León
>
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