[Ws2-hr] red line

[Rudolph Daniel]

Cleaner ... certainly and specific reference to principle 18.....

UNGP s including Principle 18 ....as well as....   (??)
rd

On Aug 8, 2017 6:23 PM, "Aikman-Scalese, Anne" <AAikman at lrrc.com> wrote:

> Would the disagreement be solved by saying,
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> When examining its operations, ICANN the organization should consider
> using tools for analysis as suggested in the UNGPs, for example Principle
> 18, as well as specific instruments such as
> HRIAs to assess its impact on Human Rights.
> However, it is up to ICANN the organization to decide the most
> appropriate tools and instruments to do this. The results of ICANN
> the organization's analysis should be reflected in
> ICANN’s annual reporting.
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> *From:* ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org] *On
> Behalf Of *Rudolph Daniel
> *Sent:* Tuesday, August 08, 2017 1:17 PM
> *To:* Greg Shatan
> *Cc:* <ws2-hr at icann.org>
> *Subject:* Re: [Ws2-hr] red line
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> I have some difficulty with  'could consider'......as there seems to be no
> intent....'should consider' ,  in my view ..goes some way towards a
> consensus,  but puts the decision firmly into the hands of ICANN... Using
> the formation that follows...(?)
> rd
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> On Aug 8, 2017 5:55 PM, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> wrote:
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> Here's a redline.
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> On Tue, Aug 8, 2017 at 3:54 PM, Niels ten Oever <lists at nielstenoever.net>
> wrote:
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> Hi all,
>
> Original text:
>
> When examining its operations, ICANN the organization could also
> consider instruments such as HRIAs to assess their impact on Human
> Rights.  However, this is up to ICANN the organization to develop and
> implement. The results of such HRIAs should be reflected in ICANN’s
> annual reporting.
>
> Text proposed by me on the call:
>
> When examining its operations, ICANN the organization could consider
> using a framework like the UNGPs as well as specific instruments such as
> HRIAs to assess its impact on Human Rights, and offer remediation.
> However, it is up to ICANN the organization to decide the most
> appropriate framework and instrument to do this. The results of ICANN
> the organization's analysis should be reflected in
> ICANN’s annual reporting.
>
> I am greatly looking forward to the suggestion of the drafting team.
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> Best,
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> Niels
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