[Ws2-hr] red line

[Aikman-Scalese, Anne]

Would the disagreement be solved by saying,

When examining its operations, ICANN the organization should consider
using tools for analysis as suggested in the UNGPs, for example Principle 18, as well as specific instruments such as
HRIAs to assess its impact on Human Rights.
However, it is up to ICANN the organization to decide the most
appropriate tools and instruments to do this. The results of ICANN
the organization's analysis should be reflected in
ICANN’s annual reporting.



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From: ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org [mailto:ws2-hr-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Rudolph Daniel
Sent: Tuesday, August 08, 2017 1:17 PM
To: Greg Shatan
Cc: <ws2-hr at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Ws2-hr] red line


I have some difficulty with  'could consider'......as there seems to be no intent....'should consider' ,  in my view ..goes some way towards a consensus,  but puts the decision firmly into the hands of ICANN... Using the formation that follows...(?)
rd

On Aug 8, 2017 5:55 PM, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc at gmail.com<mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com>> wrote:
Here's a redline.

On Tue, Aug 8, 2017 at 3:54 PM, Niels ten Oever <lists at nielstenoever.net<mailto:lists at nielstenoever.net>> wrote:
Hi all,

Original text:

When examining its operations, ICANN the organization could also
consider instruments such as HRIAs to assess their impact on Human
Rights.  However, this is up to ICANN the organization to develop and
implement. The results of such HRIAs should be reflected in ICANN’s
annual reporting.

Text proposed by me on the call:

When examining its operations, ICANN the organization could consider
using a framework like the UNGPs as well as specific instruments such as
HRIAs to assess its impact on Human Rights, and offer remediation.
However, it is up to ICANN the organization to decide the most
appropriate framework and instrument to do this. The results of ICANN
the organization's analysis should be reflected in
ICANN’s annual reporting.

I am greatly looking forward to the suggestion of the drafting team.

Best,

Niels


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