[Ws2-hr] Suggested revision from drafting team

[Kavouss Arasteh]

David,
My condolence as your text is unacceptable to me and in no way ,even
considered the comments made by three GAC members .
The text is totally refused and categorically rejected as not only does not
address those comment but it totally biased.
Regards
Kavouss


On Tue, Aug 15, 2017 at 7:25 PM, <Jorge.Cancio at bakom.admin.ch> wrote:

> Dear all,
>
> may I kindly request clarification this addition tries to address the
> comments made by three Governments during the public comment period? - I
> thought that the intention of this exercise was to find some compromise
> text bridging the gap to the positions expressed in the mentioned
> governmental inputs.
>
> Could you please help?
>
> Regards
>
> Jorge
>
>
> ________________________________
>
> Von: McAuley, David via Ws2-hr <ws2-hr at icann.org>
> Datum: 15. August 2017 um 18:09:50 MESZ
> An: ws2-hr at icann.org <ws2-hr at icann.org>
> Betreff: [Ws2-hr] Suggested revision from drafting team
>
> Hi Niels,
>
> The drafting team (Anne, Tatiana, Greg, Matthew, and I) suggests this text
> below.
>
> However, note that Anne has not yet given final approval of this text and
> thus may differ.
>
> Given the desire to get text out for consideration and the earliness of
> the hour in Anne’s time-zone we felt we should send the text now, subject
> to that one notation.
>
> SUGGESTED TEXT:
> "3.1 When examining its internal operations, ICANN the organization could,
> if it so chooses, consider using a mechanism to assess its impact on Human
> Rights. Whether and, if so, what mechanism to choose is solely up to ICANN
> the organization to decide. No such assessment should directly or
> indirectly impact gTLD policy formation or execution without being fully
> consistent with existing processes and protocols.  The results of the
> organization's analysis should be reflected in its annual reporting"
> Best regards,
> David
>
> David McAuley
> Sr International Policy & Business Development Manager,
> Verisign Inc.
> 703-948-4154
>
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