[Ws2-so_ac] Updated draft 1.1 report for our call on 23-Feb

[Greg Shatan]

Steve,

I clicked the link provided and also found it be view only.  If you can
"update link sharing" to "comment" mode, that would be helpful.
Alternately, you could send individual links to those who would like
additional rights.

Perhaps others are approaching this through a different link...

Greg


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On Thu, Feb 23, 2017 at 9:45 AM, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
wrote:

> Seun — everyone has the same “share” mode on that Google Doc, and other
> are actively making comments.
>
> I am publishing a new one later today, with the review details in an
> Annex.  Meanwhile, could you markup the Word Doc?
>
> From: Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>
> Date: Thursday, February 23, 2017 at 4:19 AM
> To: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
> Cc: "ws2-so_ac at icann.org" <ws2-so_ac at icann.org>, Brenda Brewer <
> mssi-secretariat at icann.org>
> Subject: Re: [Ws2-so_ac] Updated draft 1.1 report for our call on 23-Feb
>
> Hello Steve,
>
> I am unable to make comments on the Gdocs as it seem to be in "view only"
> mode?
>
> Regards
>
> On Wed, Feb 22, 2017 at 3:48 AM, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org
> > wrote:
>
>> Thanks for the active reviewing that many of you have already done.
>>
>> In the attached docs/PDF, I incorporated Google doc edits and comments
>> provided thus far, by:
>>
>> Tom Dale (GAC)
>> Joan Kerr (NPOC)
>> Juan Manuel Rojas (NPOC)
>> Poncelelt Ileleji (NPOC)
>> Anonymous
>>
>>
>> I also added review elements from the questionnaire response completed by
>> the Registries Stakeholder Group (RySG).   Our WG somehow did not receive
>> the RySG response when it was circulated to staff on 19-Jan.   (the RySG
>> response is now posted on our wiki
>> <https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=59643284>)
>>
>> Here are ways you can continue to suggest edits:
>> 1. Reply all with an email offering comments.
>> 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc Draft 1.1 (use track changes, please).
>> 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc Draft 1.1 (clean) at
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xDVHUW6p5bS_Zedq61fBl
>> H7UFZ4LH6lmp462iaVI2Pw/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco at netchoice.org>
>> Date: Monday, February 20, 2017 at 2:47 PM
>> To: "ws2-so_ac at icann.org" <ws2-so_ac at icann.org>
>> Cc: Brenda Brewer <mssi-secretariat at icann.org>, farzaneh badii <
>> farzaneh.badii at gmail.com>, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr at gmail.com>
>> Subject: Draft report for review before next call on 23-Feb
>>
>> As promised on our last call, we consolidated all 3 tracks of our work
>> into a single DRAFT report (PDF and MSWord attached).
>>
>> We added links to the home page and charter of the 3 groups who did not
>> respond to our questionnaire (RrSG, RySG and NPOC)
>>
>> Please review and offer edits before our upcoming working group call on
>> 23-Feb @ 05:00 UTC.
>>
>> Here are some ways you can suggest edits before our call:
>>
>> 1. Reply all with an email offering comments.
>> 2. Mark-up the attached Word Doc (use track changes, please).
>> 3. Suggest comments on the Google Doc version at
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/14y1GB9vGhsWXVXtdtZmAj
>> CWwzKVfrLfwDQYksrkDD94/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> On our call we can do first reading for our working group, and discuss
>> edits and additions for our second reading a week later.   If we can make
>> that schedule work, we can offer our report to the CCWG Plenary at our
>> face-to-face meeting at Copenhagen on 10-March.
>>
>> Best,
>> Steve, Cheryl, and Farzi
>>
>>
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