[CCWG-ACCT] Comments and advice regarding the drafting of the CCWG Executive Summary.

[Christopher Wilkinson]

Dear Thomas, Dear León:

Thankyou for your reply. 

1.	I think I have pointed out some inconsistencies within the draft Executive Summary, which the authors might in any event usefully address.
	If I brought up suggestions at a late stage it is because I had not seen the Executive Summary before. 
	There are recommendations in the report which are of great significance; they should be mentioned in the Executive Summary.

2.	To determine which of my comments relate to matters included in the draft report and which relate to new matter, I would have to read again the multiple drafts of the various chapters.
	Others have already pointed out that would be another time consuming task. 

3.	I do not exclude posting a public comment in due course; meanwhile I would trust that as many as possible of my comments and advice would be taken into account, now.
	

Regards

Christopher


On 01 Aug 2015, at 11:33, Thomas Rickert <rickert at anwaelte.de> wrote:

> Dear Christopher,
> thank you for your document and the work you put into this.
> 
> Please note that you brought up your suggestions on the day we did the final walk-through of the report with the group. Your document includes several new suggestions and recommendations that have not been previously discussed by the group. Therefore these cannot be presented to the community as recommendations by the CCWG. We suggest you submit those during the public comment period and we will then review and discuss when we analyse the public comments.
> 
> Let me add that the Executive Summary is a place where the findings presented in the report are summarized. It is therefore not possible to include topics that are not reflected in the report in there.
> 
> Thanks for your understanding.
> 
> Kind regards,
> León Sanchez, Thomas Rickert
> 
> 
>> Am 31.07.2015 um 21:00 schrieb Christopher Wilkinson <lists at christopherwilkinson.eu>:
>> 
>> Dear Co-Chairs:
>> 
>> Further to the CCWG conference calls yesterday and my comments at that time regarding the Executive Summary, please find attached, as requested, a written statement of my comments and advice.
>> 
>> Regards
>> 
>> Christopher Wilkinson
>> 
>> 
>> 
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