[Accountability-dt] For your review - updated version of draft charter

[Matthew Shears]

Hi all

Some comments/rephrasing and questions related to the Charter.

Hopefully helpful.

Matthew

On 10/27/2014 7:52 AM, Marika Konings wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> To facilitate your review of the charter, I've accepted all the 
> changes from the last version (23 October) and included in redline:
>
>   * Edits proposed by Leon to the problem statement section
>   * Edits proposed by Matthieu to the Expert Advisors section
>     (Matthieu, please note that I've made some suggested edits to your
>     proposed wording to reflect amongst others that the PEG will no
>     longer be in existence following the selection of the advisors, or
>     at least that is my understanding, as well as expectation that any
>     input from the advisors is expected to receive due consideration
>     by the CCWG -- I believe the spirit of your comments is captured
>     here, but please feel free to edit as you see fit if this is not
>     in line with your comments)
>   * Edits to fix some left over references to ICG where no longer
>     appropriate as well as updates to reflect that more than one
>     proposal may be submitted by the ICG as the two work streams are
>     likely to be completed along different timelines.
>   * Edits to reflect that in addition to a statement of interest
>     following the GNSO model, participants also have the option to
>     provide a short introduction in writing that accomplishes the same
>     goal (note, based on our experience with the CCWG, some
>     participants appear more comfortable with providing a short bio
>     instead of having to complete the online SOI form)
>
> Please note that the following action items are still outstanding:
>
>   * Keith to review and provide proposed edits for description of work
>     stream 2
>   * All to review and provide suggested questions to be included for
>     work stream 1 and 2
>   * Avri to review deliverables section first paragraph and provide
>     proposed edits
>   * Keith to review and provide proposed edits to working relationship
>     with ICG section
>   * All to review and identify any other issues that need to be
>     addressed / edited
>
> Best regards,
>
> Marika
>
>
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Matthew Shears
Director - Global Internet Policy and Human Rights
Center for Democracy & Technology (CDT)
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