[Accountability-dt] For your review - updated version of draft charter

[Izumi Okutani]

Thank you Marika for the updated draft charter.

Sending my apologies that I will not able to attend this coming call.
I'll listen to the recordings and wish you all fruitful discussions.


Regards,
Izumi

(2014/10/27 16:52), Marika Konings wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> To facilitate your review of the charter, I�ve accepted all the changes from
> the last version (23 October) and included in redline:
> * Edits proposed by Leon to the problem statement section
> * Edits proposed by Matthieu to the Expert Advisors section (Matthieu,
> please note that I�ve made some suggested edits to your proposed wording to
> reflect amongst others that the PEG will no longer be in existence following
> the selection of the advisors, or at least that is my understanding, as well
> as expectation that any input from the advisors is expected to receive due
> consideration by the CCWG � I believe the spirit of your comments is
> captured here, but please feel free to edit as you see fit if this is not in
> line with your comments)
> * Edits to fix some left over references to ICG where no longer appropriate
> as well as updates to reflect that more than one proposal may be submitted
> by the ICG as the two work streams are likely to be completed along
> different timelines.
> * Edits to reflect that in addition to a statement of interest following the
> GNSO model, participants also have the option to provide a short
> introduction in writing that accomplishes the same goal (note, based on our
> experience with the CCWG, some participants appear more comfortable with
> providing a short bio instead of having to complete the online SOI form)
> Please note that the following action items are still outstanding:
> * Keith to review and provide proposed edits for description of work stream
> 2
> * All to review and provide suggested questions to be included for work
> stream 1 and 2
> * Avri to review deliverables section first paragraph and provide proposed
> edits
> * Keith to review and provide proposed edits to working relationship with
> ICG section
> * All to review and identify any other issues that need to be addressed /
> edited
> Best regards,
>
> Marika
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