[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Draft slides for review - webinar for Chartering Organizations on the CCWG Final Report

[Erika Mann]

Understood Sylvia, thank you!

I will talk to staff today and we can change things accordingly after we
had a chance to review your points.

Thanks again!
Erika

On Thu, Jul 2, 2020 at 12:44 AM Sylvia Cadena <sylvia at apnic.net> wrote:

> Thanks for the slides Emily. My 2 cents below.
>
>
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> It might seem obvious, but I think is worth changing the text on the last
> box on slide 13 from:
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>
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> *Mechanism(s) are implemented*
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> *Including evaluation on funding applications, publication of
> results/decision-making, and decisions on allocation of proceeds*
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>
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> To:
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> *Mechanism is implemented*
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> *Including launch of call for proposals, evaluation on funding
> applications, publication of results/decision-making, decisions on
> allocation of proceeds and reporting requirements*
>
>
>
> As the mechanisms are described, there is only one to be implemented, even
> if the CCWG recommendation covers two, so it should not read mechanisms.
> Based on experience, and taking into account the discussions around the
> importance of how the process starts and finish, I think is key to mention
> the launch of the call for proposals and the reporting (or M&E)
> requirements.
>
>
>
> I don’t think the recommendations should be a section titled Annex, as
> that is really the substance of our work. Please remove the word Annex
> (hope that is not used on the full report either). As they are long and
> very wordy, it might be useful -for the purpose of a slide deck- to
> highlight at least in bold the more important part of the recommendation
> (on #1 for example is the part where it says mechanism A or B). Maybe worth
> adding some of those nice icons that were used around the presentation to
> illustrate this a bit.
>
>
>
> At some point, we talked about doing a diagram that described the flow of
> how those recommendations go together. It will be really useful to have
> something like that, so that people can understand the process and the
> considerations better.
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>
>
> The questions that were considered might go to the end of the
> presentation, as those are part of the charter, to be used as a reference
> about from where the recommendations come from.
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>
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> Sylvia
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> *From: *Ccwg-auctionproceeds <ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces at icann.org> on
> behalf of Emily Barabas <emily.barabas at icann.org>
> *Date: *Wednesday, 1 July 2020 at 7:09 pm
> *To: *"ccwg-auctionproceeds at icann.org" <ccwg-auctionproceeds at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Draft slides for review - webinar for
> Chartering Organizations on the CCWG Final Report
>
>
>
> Dear all,
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> Please find attached draft slides for the upcoming webinar for the CCWG’s
> Chartering Organizations. As a reminder, the webinar is scheduled to take
> place on Tuesday 7 July at 12:00 UTC and RSVP is required. Email
> gnso-secs at icann.org to RSVP and received Zoom details. If you have any
> feedback on the slides, please *provide your input no later than Friday 3
> July*. Please note that the Co-Chairs are still reviewing the slides as
> well and may make additional adjustments.
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>
> Thanks in advance for your input and for continuing to spread the word
> about the webinar.
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> Kind regards,
>
> Emily
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> Emily Barabas
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