[council] For your review - latest version of GNSO Review of GAC Communique

[Marika Konings]

Dear All,

To facilitate your review, I’ve incorporated Carlos’s proposed edits in redline format in the attached version. 

Carlos, please note that I made some minor editorial changes while doing so (changed ‘rounds’ to ‘procedures’ in the first sentence, and used the complete reference for the Health Index in response (1)(I)(b)). 

Please share any further comments and/or edits you may have by Wednesday 27 July at the latest.

Best regards,

Marika

On 22/07/16 15:11, "Carlos Raúl Gutiérrez G." <crg at isoc-cr.org> wrote:

    Thank you for  the extra time. Some comments on the new text.
    
    Additionally, listening to the feedback call between the GAC and Board 
    shows that there is still a lot to do ( maybe in the GAC-GNSO 
    coordination group) to clarify the relations between the GAC-BOARD-GNSO, 
      particularly of the role of individual GAC members participation in 
    PDPs, as some Councillors have suggested.
    
    In the case of the AoC Review Teams, it is my understanding that the GAC 
    member elected to the Team is a full GAC rep, or not?
    
    Wish you all a nice weekend
    
    Carlos Raúl Gutiérrez
    +506 8837 7176
    Skype: carlos.raulg
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    On 21 Jul 2016, at 17:20, Marika Konings wrote:
    
    > Dear All,
    >
    > As discussed during today’s meeting, please find attached the latest 
    > version of the GNSO Review of the GAC Communique. On page 7 you will 
    > find the addition suggested by James in bold. Please review this 
    > document and share any comments and/or edits you may have by Wednesday 
    > 27 July at the latest.
    >
    > Thanks,
    >
    > Marika
    >
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