[council] Draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting 14 April 2022

[Justine Chew]

Hello Nathalie,

Thank you for these draft minutes and please find following my comments on
the same.

Re: item 4 on SSAD ODA
1. Pg 3, 1st para, line 3: "The small team found a number of accuracies and
errors of interpretation." - shouldn't "accuracies" be "inaccuracies"?
2. Pg 3, last para, line 2: "SAD" should be "SSAD"

Re: item 5 on DNS Abuse
3. Pg 5, the largest para: there are a bunch of misplaced or redundant
commas which I will leave you to review/correct, but more importantly, the
last sentence, I doubt that Paul McGrady "added that the aim will be to
*direct* the GNSO Council on next steps", but rather that the small team
would *inform or propose to* Council the appropriate next steps.

Re: item 5 on Closed Generics
4. Pg 6, 3rd para, line 5: the sentence, "*The NCSG also doesn’t believe
that closed generics is a GAC specific issue and **disapproves of the
advantage the GAC is benefitting from." *seems incomplete. Perhaps add the
words "this dialogue" after the word"from"?

Kind regards,
Justine



On Wed, 20 Apr 2022 at 15:35, Nathalie Peregrine via council <
council at gnso.icann.org> wrote:

> Dear Councilors,
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> Attached, please find the draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting held on
>  Thursday, 14 April 2022.
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> If there are no comments, these minutes will be published on the website
> as approved, according to the GNSO Rules of Procedure
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> "If no objections are received within 10 days, the minutes will be
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> Kind Regards,
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