[CPWG] Revised EPDP Advice

[Alan Greenberg]

Attached are all of the revisions since voting has begun.

All are typos or clarifications.

Thank to all of the great proof-readers (I always find it interesting 
that non-native English speakers always excel at this!)

It is normal that a document drafted this quickly has such errors. 
Hopefully if there are any more, we can catch them BEFORE the vote completes!

Alan
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