[CPWG] [registration-issues-wg] EPDP Submission

[Seun Ojedeji]

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Kindly excuse brevity and typos

On Thu, 3 Jan 2019, 11:49 Bastiaan Goslings <bastiaan.goslings at ams-ix.net
wrote:

> All,.
>
> Putting my personal preferences aside, and ignoring the fact that some
> people consider me to be part of a ’surveillance caucus’ ;-) ,


SO: Oh there is a caucus now. :-)

I think this contribution nicely covers ALAC’s consensus with regard to the
> initial report. Well done!
>

SO: +1

Happy New year

Regards

>
> cheers,
> Bastiaan
>
>
> ----------------
>
>
> A few nits/typo’s I noticed, just for the record as I know I am too late
> and they will not be incorporated:
>
> Point 45: add ‘not’ —> ‘Without the Admin fields, there is the potential
> for a registration record not having’ (etc)
>
> Point 87: the GDPR only applies to _natural_ persons, not legal persons -
> see recital 14
>
> Point 147: a bracket is missing after ‘disclosure’?
>
> And I do not know whether it was submitted as such, but the version on the
> wiki page to be voted upon by the ALAC does not include answers for
> recommendations 13, 14 and 21.
>
>
>
>
>
> > On 20 Dec 2018, at 06:50, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
> wrote:
> >
> > The draft submission has been updated at
> > https://community.icann.org/x/1wLuBQ, largely in response to the
> > comments submitted. A
> >
> > The most significant changes are for questions 29, 30, 44, 45, 145,
> > 147. I don't think that any of the changes will change the comfort
> > level of those who have been active in our discussions within At-Large.
> >
> > The document is largely frozen subject to final editing and will be
> > submitted on Friday.
> >
> > Alan
> >
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