[CPWG] EPDP Submission

[Maureen Hilyard]

Congratulations to Hadia and Alan for their work on the report and coping
with the EPDP "Input" form. With many thanks to the members of the CPWG
team who contributed to the valuable conversations in support of our EPDP
reps.

Many thanks also to Justine, Jonathan and the many others who collaborated
on the SubPro PDP Report so we could sign off on this as well.

Great teamwork (including Evin and other staff) on two very comprehensive
pieces of work on behalf of the ALAC and At-Large, and making for a very
productive start to 2019.  Thank you so much.

Maureen

On Thu, Jan 3, 2019 at 4:50 PM Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
wrote:

> On behalf of Hadia and myself thanks to all for the kind comments.
>
> And particularly to Bastiaan not only for his
> positive thoughts but his keen proofreading. The
> first two "nits" completely reverse the meaning!  I will wet the EPDP know.
>
> Alan
>
>
> At 03/01/2019 05:49 AM, Bastiaan Goslings wrote:
> >All,
> >
> >I am on the verge of voting for -and approving-
> >ALAC’s submission, and I want to express my
> >gratitude for those responsible for drafting it. Especially Hadia and
> Alan.
> >
> >Putting my personal preferences aside, and
> >ignoring the fact that some people consider me
> >to be part of a ’surveillance caucus’ ;-) ,
> >I think this contribution nicely covers ALAC’s
> >consensus with regard to the initial report. Well done!
> >
> >cheers,
> >Bastiaan
> >
> >
> >----------------
> >
> >
> >A few nits/typo’s I noticed, just for the
> >record as I know I am too late and they will not be incorporated:
> >
> >Point 45: add ‘not’ —> ‘Without the Admin
> >ffields, there is the potential for a registration record not having’
> (etc)
> >
> >Point 87: the GDPR only applies to _natural_
> >persons, not legal persons - see recital 14
> >
> >Point 147: a bracket is missing after ‘disclosure’?
> >
> >And I do not know whether it was submitted as
> >such, but the version on the wiki page to be
> >voted upon by the ALAC does not include answers
> >for recommendations 13, 14 and 21.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > > On 20 Dec 2018, at 06:50, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg at mcgill.ca>
> wrote:
> > >
> > > The draft submission has been updated at
> > > https://community.icann.org/x/1wLuBQ, largely in response to the
> > > comments submitted. A
> > >
> > > The most significant changes are for questions 29, 30, 44, 45, 145,
> > > 147. I don't think that any of the changes will change the comfort
> > > level of those who have been active in our discussions within At-Large.
> > >
> > > The document is largely frozen subject to final editing and will be
> > > submitted on Friday.
> > >
> > > Alan
> > >
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