[CPWG] Fwd: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final Report

[Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond]

Hello all,

here is the first draft of the EPDP Team Final Report.
I gather that Hadia and Alan will be able to brief us on the changes on
our next CPWG call, but in the meantime wanted to thank them on their
dedication in Toronto.
Kindest regards,

Olivier

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Subject: 	[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final Report
Date: 	Sun, 20 Jan 2019 06:22:46 +0000
From: 	Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
To: 	GNSO EPDP <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>



Dear EPDP Team,

 

As discussed, the Staff Support Team has prepared a first draft of the
Final Report for your review (see
https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1E6W-daNTaadOhG5BRlzNJQbrT9MSoKDn/view?usp=sharing].
In addition to the administrative updates to reflect that this is the
Final Report, a new section has been added concerning the public comment
period on the Initial Report. Furthermore, following the outcomes of the
Toronto F2F meeting, the relevant recommendations and other sections of
the report have been updated to reflect:

 

  * Highlighted in green – purposes / recommendations that have received
    the general support of the EPDP Team for inclusion
  * Highlighted in blue – items that are still under active
    consideration (if you have suggestions in relation to these items,
    please make sure to introduce these as part of the relevant agenda
    items for upcoming meetings)
  * Highlighted in yellow – updates to be made following review of
    language to reflect the approach that has been in principle agreed
    by the EPDP Team
  * Other redline changes – intended to clarify and/or address input
    provided by the EPDP Team during its deliberations

 

Similar to how this was done for the Initial Report, you are requested
to provide your group’s input via the following google document (see
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sVZ9odV0qK1Bk8a4bDwWe5RW_PBzOnYBhHW_GnLL8jw/edit?usp=sharing).
Please refrain from proposing edits to the sections highlighted in green
as the current wording reflects in certain cases a carefully crafted
compromise. Any changes in relation to these sections will need to go
back to the full EPDP Team review. For other sections, minor updates /
corrections will be applied by staff. Any substantive changes / edits
will be brought back to the EPDP Team for consideration.

 

As discussed in Toronto, the audience for this report is the GNSO
Council and subsequently the ICANN Board, so please keep this in mind as
you consider possible structural changes to the report. As you are also
aware, there are a number of elements that are required to be included
in the Final Report (whether it is in the body of the report, an annex
or by reference). As also discussed, following publication of the Final
Report, the EPDP Team may want to consider whether it would be helpful
to produce a summary version that would be specifically intended for
external audiences?

 

Please commence your review as soon as possible.

 

Best regards,

 

Caitlin, Berry and Marika

 

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