[CPWG] [registration-issues-wg] Fwd: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final Report

[Seun Ojedeji]

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Kindly excuse brevity and typos

On Sun, 20 Jan 2019, 11:56 Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond <ocl at gih.com wrote:

> Hello all,
>
> here is the first draft of the EPDP Team Final Report.
> I gather that Hadia and Alan will be able to brief us on the changes on
> our next CPWG call, but in the meantime wanted to thank them on their
> dedication in Toronto.
>

SO: +1

Regards

> Kindest regards,
>
> Olivier
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final Report
> Date: Sun, 20 Jan 2019 06:22:46 +0000
> From: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org> <marika.konings at icann.org>
> To: GNSO EPDP <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org> <gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>
> Dear EPDP Team,
>
>
>
> As discussed, the Staff Support Team has prepared a first draft of the
> Final Report for your review (see
> https://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1E6W-daNTaadOhG5BRlzNJQbrT9MSoKDn/view?usp=sharing].
> In addition to the administrative updates to reflect that this is the Final
> Report, a new section has been added concerning the public comment period
> on the Initial Report. Furthermore, following the outcomes of the Toronto
> F2F meeting, the relevant recommendations and other sections of the report
> have been updated to reflect:
>
>
>
>    - Highlighted in green – purposes / recommendations that have received
>    the general support of the EPDP Team for inclusion
>    - Highlighted in blue – items that are still under active
>    consideration (if you have suggestions in relation to these items, please
>    make sure to introduce these as part of the relevant agenda items for
>    upcoming meetings)
>    - Highlighted in yellow – updates to be made following review of
>    language to reflect the approach that has been in principle agreed by the
>    EPDP Team
>    - Other redline changes – intended to clarify and/or address input
>    provided by the EPDP Team during its deliberations
>
>
>
> Similar to how this was done for the Initial Report, you are requested to
> provide your group’s input via the following google document (see
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sVZ9odV0qK1Bk8a4bDwWe5RW_PBzOnYBhHW_GnLL8jw/edit?usp=sharing).
> Please refrain from proposing edits to the sections highlighted in green as
> the current wording reflects in certain cases a carefully crafted
> compromise. Any changes in relation to these sections will need to go back
> to the full EPDP Team review. For other sections, minor updates /
> corrections will be applied by staff. Any substantive changes / edits will
> be brought back to the EPDP Team for consideration.
>
>
>
> As discussed in Toronto, the audience for this report is the GNSO Council
> and subsequently the ICANN Board, so please keep this in mind as you
> consider possible structural changes to the report. As you are also aware,
> there are a number of elements that are required to be included in the
> Final Report (whether it is in the body of the report, an annex or by
> reference). As also discussed, following publication of the Final Report,
> the EPDP Team may want to consider whether it would be helpful to produce a
> summary version that would be specifically intended for external audiences?
>
>
>
> Please commence your review as soon as possible.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
>
>
>
> *Marika Konings*
>
> *Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation
> for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) *
>
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