[CPWG] [registration-issues-wg] Fwd: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final Report

[Marita Moll]

I was thinking of putting together a few simple slide re: comments to 
strategic plan -- comment period ends Feb. 11. Will we have time for 
that -- or wait till next week?

Marita

On 1/20/2019 6:02 PM, Holly Raiche wrote:
> Thanks Olivier
>
> My suggestion for the next CPWG - yes , concentrate on the EPDP, but 
> particularly on the items highlighted in blue since those are the 
> areas still open for discussion.  In particular, recommendations 13, 
> 14 and 22 (which will reopen many established policies)
>
> Holly
>
>
>
>> On Jan 20, 2019, at 9:56 PM, Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond <ocl at gih.com 
>> <mailto:ocl at gih.com>> wrote:
>>
>> Hello all,
>>
>> here is the first draft of the EPDP Team Final Report.
>> I gather that Hadia and Alan will be able to brief us on the changes 
>> on our next CPWG call, but in the meantime wanted to thank them on 
>> their dedication in Toronto.
>> Kindest regards,
>>
>> Olivier
>>
>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>> Subject: 	[Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - draft EPDP Team Final 
>> Report
>> Date: 	Sun, 20 Jan 2019 06:22:46 +0000
>> From: 	Marika Konings<marika.konings at icann.org>
>> To: 	GNSO EPDP<gnso-epdp-team at icann.org>
>>
>>
>>
>> Dear EPDP Team,
>> As discussed, the Staff Support Team has prepared a first draft of 
>> the Final Report for your review 
>> (seehttps://drive.google.com/a/icann.org/file/d/1E6W-daNTaadOhG5BRlzNJQbrT9MSoKDn/view?usp=sharing]. 
>> In addition to the administrative updates to reflect that this is the 
>> Final Report, a new section has been added concerning the public 
>> comment period on the Initial Report. Furthermore, following the 
>> outcomes of the Toronto F2F meeting, the relevant recommendations and 
>> other sections of the report have been updated to reflect:
>>
>>   * Highlighted in green – purposes / recommendations that have
>>     received the general support of the EPDP Team for inclusion
>>   * Highlighted in blue – items that are still under active
>>     consideration (if you have suggestions in relation to these
>>     items, please make sure to introduce these as part of the
>>     relevant agenda items for upcoming meetings)
>>   * Highlighted in yellow – updates to be made following review of
>>     language to reflect the approach that has been in principle
>>     agreed by the EPDP Team
>>   * Other redline changes – intended to clarify and/or address input
>>     provided by the EPDP Team during its deliberations
>>
>> Similar to how this was done for the Initial Report, you are 
>> requested to provide your group’s input via the following google 
>> document 
>> (seehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1sVZ9odV0qK1Bk8a4bDwWe5RW_PBzOnYBhHW_GnLL8jw/edit?usp=sharing). 
>> Please refrain from proposing edits to the sections highlighted in 
>> green as the current wording reflects in certain cases a carefully 
>> crafted compromise. Any changes in relation to these sections will 
>> need to go back to the full EPDP Team review. For other sections, 
>> minor updates / corrections will be applied by staff. Any substantive 
>> changes / edits will be brought back to the EPDP Team for consideration.
>> As discussed in Toronto, the audience for this report is the GNSO 
>> Council and subsequently the ICANN Board, so please keep this in mind 
>> as you consider possible structural changes to the report. As you are 
>> also aware, there are a number of elements that are required to be 
>> included in the Final Report (whether it is in the body of the 
>> report, an annex or by reference). As also discussed, following 
>> publication of the Final Report, the EPDP Team may want to consider 
>> whether it would be helpful to produce a summary version that would 
>> be specifically intended for external audiences?
>> Please commence your review as soon as possible.
>> Best regards,
>> Caitlin, Berry and Marika
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